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Shadowlord717

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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71729d
    Commented

    If you're seeking inspiration for your novel "Reborn as Hades in DXD," you might find it helpful to explore other fanfiction works on WebNovel, like "Reborn as Hades" and similar stories. You can discover some great ideas and inspiration from those works.

    Ch 24 A question from my friend
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    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · illyisabot
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71729d
    Commented

    Keep up the great work on your Ben 10 fanfiction! I genuinely enjoy reading it. I'm really looking forward to seeing you finish this story all the way to the end.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14:Talk with gramps
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    In ben 10 not as ben
    Anime & Comics · Newfound
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71729d
    Commented

    +1

    1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse
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    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · illyisabot
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171mth
    Commented

    It is good bro your 18+ [img=faceslap][img=recommend]

    Ch 88 Chapter 88: Threesome with his wives 18+!!!
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    Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger
    Anime & Comics · stromerthaha
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171mth
    Replied to Shadowlord717
    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Interrupted
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    I Am Baki
    Anime & Comics · Aht
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171mth
    Commented

    Places be lala [img=proud]

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Interrupted
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    I Am Baki
    Anime & Comics · Aht
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171mth
    Commented

    During the first time I read this novel Overlord fanfiction, I enjoyed Volume One; however, in Volume Two, there is a little bit of a problem. I feel like when I read it, it's as if a different author wrote it or, in some cases, it's not really well-written. It's full of explicit content, lemons, or adult themes. There's no introduction about how the main character plans for the future or his position in the new world. It's just focused on the main character's immediate desires without considering his surroundings. Additionally, he often argues with his AI system, making it seem like a childish portrayal rather than a mature character development. In my opinion, it feels like a beginner's work or simply an indulgence in obsessions. This is just my perspective; others might have different opinions. I believe Volume Two needs to be rewritten, but Volume One is okay, although it could benefit from some revisions as well but it’s still okay

    Ch 38 Chapter 37: New World
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    Overlord: Ancient one
    Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171mth
    Commented

    Dear author, I thoroughly enjoy reading your story. The title of the fanfiction, "Jumping to the Multiverse When Our Star Reading," is enjoyable and very well-written. I appreciate the effort you've put into crafting it. There are no other issues with it. I commend you for completing one of your stories; it speaks volumes about your dedication and talent. I truly appreciate your commitment to finishing your work, unlike some other authors who leave their stories unfinished. Your perseverance is admirable, and I thank you for creating such captivating fanfiction. My respect to you, Sensors, Shadowlord717, WebNovel Reader

    Ch 212 Chapter 211 - The End
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    Jumping Through the Omniverse as a Conduit
    Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7175mth
    Commented

    I really don’t like his brother died in the volcano. I understand is for character development but there’s another options for character development. Maybe this is just an excuse to make that character [img=disgusted][img=Sigh] very convenient

    Ch 19 Chapter 19. Aftermath
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    Lion King: Son of Mufasa
    Movies · Passerby_Venne
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7175mth
    Commented

    "No need to rewrite the story; just continue until you finish the fanfiction. Once you have the ending, you can then edit and rewrite the story."

    Ch 14 Hiatus
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    The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7175mth
    Commented

    "Thank you for the chapter you wrote for your fanfiction. I really appreciate the way you crafted the story, and it carries some positive values. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend]

    Ch 54 Getting things in order
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    Hades in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7176mth
    Commented

    "Thank you for the wonderful fanfiction you've created. I appreciate the ideas and creativity you've put into it. As a reader, I've encountered many stories that were left unfinished, and it can be frustrating. I hope you consider completing your fanfiction. Are you planning to continue it? Please remember to craft an ending that leaves the readers satisfied. That's my main concern regarding the fanfiction. I thoroughly enjoy your fanfiction, and I encourage you to keep up the good work."

    Ch 50 Athena
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    Hades in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71710mth
    Commented

    Thanks for creating this fanfic. I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. Keep up the good work, Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Jk thanks for the chapter and wonderful day for you[img=recommend]

    Ch 111 Holy Precincts
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    Battle Across The Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Odyin
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71710mth
    Commented

    No, there's still potential of creating the foundation of the overload I appreciate the way you introduce the world in your fanfiction. I particularly enjoy seeing how the main characters build their strengths with the help of their system, eventually becoming powerful. To enhance reader engagement, I would suggest updating the chapters more frequently, ideally every day or every two days. Readers who follow the fiction eagerly anticipate updates and may feel a sense of longing when the updates are infrequent." Some readers may want to skip certain parts of the story due to lengthy chapter updates. They prefer to jump directly to the key points or events that satisfy their immediate needs. However, after finding what they seek, they may leave the fan fiction, while others may complain about the remaining parts of the story." "If you directly skip to the point where the overload storyline begins, they may find that the overload parts of the story become less original and seem like a copy-paste of previous content. Consequently, the popularity of the overload fanfiction may decline. As a reader, I have experienced instances where fanfiction loses its appeal when it stops halfway due to a lack of updates or other reasons. I encourage you to continue your good work and maintain your own pace when updating the story." "Just keep up the good work and maintain your own pace when it comes to updates. If you are unable to release a chapter every day, you can consider making each chapter longer instead. Alternatively, you can choose to post updates on a weekly or biweekly basis. Ultimately, the decision is yours to make." Thanks for creating fanfiction of this overload From shadowlord

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: World Champion IV
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    Overlord: Ancient one
    Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71711mth
    Replied to Vekay_Legend

    🤣Hahahah keep up the good work If you have any kind of idea or inspirations just write in the notebook so some good idea will not be loss I cannot wait for your next worth hahah 😂

    Ch 20 Decision Poll
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    From Shadows To The DC Universe
    Movies · Vekay_Legend
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71711mth
    Commented

    This is your friend hood shadowlord 😎 I read your fanfiction it was an epic fanfic Thank you for create this masterpiece it was very fun to read Keep up the good work If someone criticize you or anything that you created, just don't give up and improve Your skills and your passion If you feeling tired of making a fanfic of you want to drop your friend fanfic, please make one chapter of the ending of your fanfiction There's a lot of writers that are making fanfiction are dropping they did not put any kind of explanation of their fanfiction , they just drop a make another fanfiction without explaining anything they just tired of making that fiction If you have a plan please make the ending of your story That's all keep up the good work I love your ideas and creations and your wonderful creativity I hope you have a wonderful morning afternoon and night

    Ch 20 Decision Poll
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    From Shadows To The DC Universe
    Movies · Vekay_Legend
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord71711mth
    Posted

    Keep up the good work. Sjshshshshssj

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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171yr
    Commented

    I am a man of culture that encounter your fanfic is nice to read. It's OK your first language is not English, but you have amazing ideas that shows your creativity. This is my idea if you want to improve your fanfic as the writer 1. Ask the reader for ideas. 2. Do not give up your fanfiction until the end of your fan fiction story. 3. If you want to take a break you need to let the readers no before you take a break of your story. 4. Do not delete your fanfic because some readers still read the story,if the authors give up their work, because some other reason , the readers still reading until the end that they know the author is giving up of the story because they want to go back to the world that they like to see 5. You need to include the other girls that you pair for the main character make more lemons scenes. 6. Limit your harem of girls the maximum is 5 that you need to put, so you will not have a difficult to write other girls in your story. So you will not forget other girls in the story 7. If you don't have any ideas, read other fan fictions to but in your story. 8. Great a Patreon account that the fans can purchase your advanced chapter , you can gain some income at the same time you have the motivation to create your work. That's all I think of keep up the good work until the end PS from Shadowlord 717

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: The First Contact
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    A New God's life in Marvel (Book-1)
    Anime & Comics · God_Doom
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171yr
    Replied to God_Doom

    I am a man of culture that encounter your fanfic is nice to read. It's OK your first language is not English, but you have amazing ideas that shows your creativity. This is my idea if you want to improve your fanfic as the writer 1. Ask the reader for ideas. 2. Do not give up your fanfiction until the end of your fan fiction story. 3. If you want to take a break you need to let the readers no before you take a break of your story. 4. Do not delete your fanfic because some readers still read the story,if the authors give up their work, because some other reason , the readers still reading until the end that they know the author is giving up of the story because they want to go back to the world that they like to see 5. You need to include the other girls that you pair for the main character make more lemons scenes. 6. Limit your harem of girls the maximum is 5 that you need to put, so you will not have a difficult to write other girls in your story. So you will not forget other girls in the story 7. If you don't have any ideas, read other fan fictions to but in your story. 8. Great a Patreon account that the fans can purchase your advanced chapter , you can gain some income at the same time you have the motivation to create your work. That's all I think of keep up the good work until the end PS from Shadowlord 717[img=recommend]

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    A New God's life in Marvel (Book-1)
    Anime & Comics · God_Doom
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  • Shadowlord717
    Shadowlord7171yr
    Commented

    this fanfic it is very satisfying to read and amazing idea and amazing storytelling 10/10

    Ch 6 6
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    Overlord Quake
    Anime & Comics · VatOfRedundancy
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