B0mbaCl0ck
Man of true culture. Master at the Dao of Pussiology and Harems. Heir of Wincester.
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I have a feeling she went missing for 3 years cause she met the father of MC, who also gave her the pendant. Stuff happened, he sent her away with the pendant and kids, and then sent her somewhere else with some guardians, based on how she is treated like some queen. Though, that doesn't explain her strength, if she has any. Also, sad, i was kinda hoping for MC to bang her too since that's the trend, but if she is waiting for her husband to handle trouble while treating someone else as her kid, it would be disappointing for me. Would be better if he died during some schemes and she had to stay hidden with leftover loyalists, trying to stay safe i guess.
Well, at least he is finally doing something to grow. But shouldn't he also gain bonus stats depending on what he devours? Like strength from the serpent and so on? He gains a bloodline afterall, so it should come with more bonuses than one skill. His growth is so meagre and controlled... I am pretty sure that even with the dragon heart, his growth will be meagre and disappointing. Unless he relies on temporary system stuff, he will never amount to anything in his life.
A bad character buildup. What's the point of being so strong if he is useless in the end? It all feels so forced. Forced to bluff his way, then given temporary stuff that absurdly works during situations of crisis. Fabricating situations for him to use the stuff, and going through a cycle of weakness and strength. There's no fun in it man... Cause in the end, the real MC has 0 value. It's all luck.. he is still worthless in the end. At least there could have been a couple of smut scenes, but even those were skipped. I don't know what's in the mind of the author, but this story is a failure. It has its good points, not gonna deny, but the way the MC is built is so trashy... All the mystery and interest behind him is shattered by forced plots like these. They don't feel natural.
This is really getting pathetic. So many chapters and he can only work on borrowed strength.. One of the worst MC's i have seen in a long time.. All that talk about strength and he hasn't learned anything. He had an entire library of techniques and books to read through, yet he abbandoned it. An inheritance, he gave up on it. Only keeping temporary stuff while being completely useless.. This is really getting boring.
It's his own fault for maintaining this mentality. He has no strength to speak off..
Honestly.. i hope the father is dead.. If the so called Dean is a target, she shouldn't be married any longer.
Wow.. so much chat gpt.
The fight was quite a bit dragged out.. It felt unnecessary to make it this long, since it wasn't even that exciting. It also didn't show any increase in power for the characters with the way it was written, so i found myself mostly skimming through it to finish the chap quickly. You should focus more on keeping to the point, as many parts feel dragged out and repetitive.. There's also barely any dialogue, so the chars feel flat and shallow. Rather than narrating how things go, and the chars reactions, try showing them through actions and dialogue.
So instead of a midschooler she looks like a teenager now?
You described the woman as if she were some femme fatalle, only to make her some average sized woman. I can't see that type as sinful no matter what.. Skinny just isn't my type so to me she's just same as anyone else. You also seem biased though, since Alice is also modest sized, while Ann is even less than that. If you want variety then add the developed ones too, otherwise people might take you for a lolicon.
This phrase has no meaning.
Modest chest isn't enough to be called sinful.. Barely average..Not worth mentioning.
This is the same bid as Argon's. you mean 400?