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B0mbaCl0ck

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Man of true culture. Master at the Dao of Pussiology and Harems. Heir of Wincester.

2021-03-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck1h
    Replied to Akkuzz_69

    I have a feeling she went missing for 3 years cause she met the father of MC, who also gave her the pendant. Stuff happened, he sent her away with the pendant and kids, and then sent her somewhere else with some guardians, based on how she is treated like some queen. Though, that doesn't explain her strength, if she has any. Also, sad, i was kinda hoping for MC to bang her too since that's the trend, but if she is waiting for her husband to handle trouble while treating someone else as her kid, it would be disappointing for me. Would be better if he died during some schemes and she had to stay hidden with leftover loyalists, trying to stay safe i guess.

    Ch 226 Talk continues!
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck1h
    Commented

    Well, at least he is finally doing something to grow. But shouldn't he also gain bonus stats depending on what he devours? Like strength from the serpent and so on? He gains a bloodline afterall, so it should come with more bonuses than one skill. His growth is so meagre and controlled... I am pretty sure that even with the dragon heart, his growth will be meagre and disappointing. Unless he relies on temporary system stuff, he will never amount to anything in his life.

    Ch 102 Chapter 102: Is the Bloodline trying to...
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck2h
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    A bad character buildup. What's the point of being so strong if he is useless in the end? It all feels so forced. Forced to bluff his way, then given temporary stuff that absurdly works during situations of crisis. Fabricating situations for him to use the stuff, and going through a cycle of weakness and strength. There's no fun in it man... Cause in the end, the real MC has 0 value. It's all luck.. he is still worthless in the end. At least there could have been a couple of smut scenes, but even those were skipped. I don't know what's in the mind of the author, but this story is a failure. It has its good points, not gonna deny, but the way the MC is built is so trashy... All the mystery and interest behind him is shattered by forced plots like these. They don't feel natural.

    Ch 86 Chapter 86: Out of all the people...
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck2h
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    This is really getting pathetic. So many chapters and he can only work on borrowed strength.. One of the worst MC's i have seen in a long time.. All that talk about strength and he hasn't learned anything. He had an entire library of techniques and books to read through, yet he abbandoned it. An inheritance, he gave up on it. Only keeping temporary stuff while being completely useless.. This is really getting boring.

    Ch 84 Chapter 84: If not now, then never
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck3h
    Commented

    I wonder how Suyin doesn't know anything when her sister is supposed to be some famous powerhouse who's in hiding.

    Ch 226 Talk continues!
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck3h
    Commented

    So they did it, but there was no scene. Classic chinese trash.. To be expected. What is the point of romance and harem, if the actual developments are glossed over? Mere fanservice trash. I'm already bored with this novel. So unsatisfying.

    Ch 73 Chapter 73: Day Of Love
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck3h
    Commented

    Well... I wonder when will MC finally gain some strength.. It's really dumb how weak he is and how much he struggles... it's not even funny.

    Ch 68 Chapter 68: Master's Gift
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck4h
    Commented

    It's his own fault for maintaining this mentality. He has no strength to speak off..

    Even if he wasn't strong, it shouldn't matter. He hadn't done anything wrong to that girl, yet she had always mocked him and looked down on him.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck4h
    Commented

    Honestly.. i hope the father is dead.. If the so called Dean is a target, she shouldn't be married any longer.

    The woman wasn't Eren's target. His main Target was her mother. Her mother was the Dean of the Mythical Hero Academy and one of the Four Overlords.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck6h
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    Ehh.. Will MC really remain a weak poser to the end? I don't like chars who bluff their way through things with no depth... It doesn't make for good comedy since it makes things feel forced in their favour...

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: A Beauty in Embrace; A resolve
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck7h
    Commented

    So will this MC continue to be a poser without any depth to himself at all?

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Selection and Reward
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck7h
    Commented

    Wow.. so much chat gpt.

    "Your presence challenges me to become a better version of myself, to rise above my fears and insecurities. That's why I felt nervous when I found myself in your presence."
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck10h
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    Again, idk why Frank was given so much importance here.. Wasn't worth an entire chapter. I skipped most of it.

    Ch 74 CHAPTER 74 – Frank’s Fight.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck10h
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    The fight was quite a bit dragged out.. It felt unnecessary to make it this long, since it wasn't even that exciting. It also didn't show any increase in power for the characters with the way it was written, so i found myself mostly skimming through it to finish the chap quickly. You should focus more on keeping to the point, as many parts feel dragged out and repetitive.. There's also barely any dialogue, so the chars feel flat and shallow. Rather than narrating how things go, and the chars reactions, try showing them through actions and dialogue.

    Ch 73 CHAPTER 73 – Ann Vs T-Rex.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck11h
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    And i assume MC is now SSS or higher, right? His bloodlines should have pushed him to that level in a month, and it's been 3, so he should be close to EX rank even.

    Ch 66 CHAPTER 66 – Noctura’s Growth and Recap 1.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck11h
    Commented

    So instead of a midschooler she looks like a teenager now?

    Ann had gained some blue highlights in her hair, and her breasts had increased a bit in size. Her beauty which was already mind-blowing had now upped a tier.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck13h
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    You described the woman as if she were some femme fatalle, only to make her some average sized woman. I can't see that type as sinful no matter what.. Skinny just isn't my type so to me she's just same as anyone else. You also seem biased though, since Alice is also modest sized, while Ann is even less than that. If you want variety then add the developed ones too, otherwise people might take you for a lolicon.

    If not for the high-quality fabric used to make those clothes, they would not even be hanging over Luna's sinful body.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck14h
    Commented

    This phrase has no meaning.

    What Ann felt the moment Alex hit her dagger was lower control and flexibility as she felt that she could do better, but she was unable to do it.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck14h
    Commented

    Modest chest isn't enough to be called sinful.. Barely average..Not worth mentioning.

    If not for the high-quality fabric used to make those clothes, they would not even be hanging over Luna's sinful body.
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  • B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck14h
    Commented

    This is the same bid as Argon's. you mean 400?

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