NziBooks

Nice I love how your book shows a different perspective

I like how you took inspiration from arifutera and instant death. I like how the main character is a mystery and we don’t know who it is yet.

there will be ayame but she it won't be the main focus

Nice. You need to work on the spelling.

Moooorrreeee. Mystical Give me some moorrreee

he he he

not yet but he saves women from rapists

So far good. The character experiences racism cause he doesn't have any powers in the beginning but gets it. But you need to focus on uploading more.

Nice story ultra like how you incorporate real-life problems. Also i like this power up scene. I gave you 3 stars updating for now until you update some more

yeah maybe koku's in the other book we planning