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Qafar_Jhon14dCommentedOk, then MC can't be a swordsman either that's cliche AF
If you have any ideas you want to have included feel free to tell me, just don't recommend anything extremely cliche like necromancer abilities or something of the sort...- Qafar_Jhon21dCommented
thanks god finally...
It was fine if they were suspicious of his strength. He was here to train, so they might as well see his true strength later. - Qafar_Jhon24dCommented
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Jiang Shixue immediately said:detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Qafar_Jhon2mthCommented
Smooth.....
Seeing Claire clinging to him like a frightened deer, Jeremy couldn't help but kiss her moist red lips, chuckling softly, "Don't worry. With me here, it's going to be alright." - Qafar_Jhon2mthCommented
simp
I Instantly fell for her character, as I found myself inexplicably drawn to her, forging a bond that transcended the digital realm. - Qafar_Jhon2mthCommented
And he'll get c#ckblocked again
A/n: the next chapter will be R-18, so... you know the drill. - Qafar_Jhon3mthCommentedCh 9 A very special meeting.
- Qafar_Jhon3mthCommentedCh 438 Begin
- Qafar_Jhon4mthCommentedCh 180 The Path of Revenge... Part-1.
- Qafar_Jhon4mthReplied to Javon_Nixon
1) I wasn't talking about their personality either I was talking about their motive. 2) It is true that his family does not care about familial and interpersonal relationship, they only care about strength. That's why he's twin sister have all those resources and she even can command hidden guard. 3) Are you saying that someone from his clan will harm him? Again for what reason? And if he shows his potential he will have his own personal guard. 4) I agree on you this one if he have talent and he doesn't show it to his clan they will not able to help him grow. Right now he only have raw strength he doesn't know anything about weapon. MC have a powerful background, it doesn't make sense he have to hide his strength and potential, and I really don't want to read about a cliche "hiding true strength" novel where everything is about how MC can hide his strength rather than the plot
Ch 17 Revenge - Qafar_Jhon4mthCommented
'Hiding true power' is an annoying and overused trope, no one will respect you if you are weak. I think he should show enough strength. He will be one of the strongest if not strongest in the world it will be meaningless to hiding his strength after a certain point .I hope you understand Webnovel readers do not enjoy cliche anymore.
Ch 17 Revenge - Qafar_Jhon4mthCommentedCh 35 Smile [1]
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None??
This paragraph has been deleted. - Qafar_Jhon4mthCommentedCh 14 The Weakest Black Star [2]