gary_manus

Probably another flashback to a previous life, the author isn't very good with transitions.

Nah! Mei is an Idol, Not Allowed to date.

Though I Like The Idea Of Tang San Being From the Earth's Past He Is From A Decidedly Different World, But The Shear Hilarity Of This Chapter Gets It A Pass. Absolute Gold.

Great Story So Far. The Premise Is Unique, The Current Development Is Interesting. I Hope The Author Continues Writing This.

Overall this story isn't bad by fan fiction standards. But as a whole the author just seems to be ticking off points on a checklist going from movie to movie and arc to arc. It feels like the author is just trying to hit points and will completely screw the power scale and continuity to get there

Not Read This Story But I Was Just Wondering If You Were Ever Going To Continue With Any Of Your Other Stories.

Great story. Truthfully I think the FL should get back with her ex, although he's a little stupid he reminds me of a golden retriever bf who was tricked by other people. Lu Xun seems good too but for once I want a story where the FL gets back with an ex who isnt a complete jerk and abuser.

To be honest I've read about 40 or 50 of these rebirth romance stories but this is the first review I've bothered to and it's because of the ML. Seriously how is a 20 year old harassing a 15 year old okay. I've read stories where the FL is 17 nearly 18 and that is better but still not great. But this is just unacceptable and disgusting.