Thank you for the review. I'm glad you put some notes as this is really my first outing with this XD It's rough around the edges and all, but I'm always going over it to see what to improve. Like you mentioned ,what world are they in, what's the role of the main character and things like that. So I appreciate you taking some time out to make those points. I'll make sure to review the writing and make adjustments [img=recommend]. Thank you :D