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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze20d
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    OK, let's go. The story is good, the plot is well developed and has interesting changes in relation to the canon. Now let's go to the negative points, although the world is well built, the same cannot be said about the characters, the protagonist has a good construction, but the secondary characters need more development and depth. Another negative point is the scarcity of dialogue and third-person POV and other characters, there are a few here and there, but they are the minority (it is worth noting that this may be a matter of personal taste, I prefer to read stories told mostly by a narrator , with increments of the characters' POV). Last but not least - in fact, this point is probably the most important - the size of the chapters and the rhythm of the story, there are already 85 chapters, but only 65 thousand words, to make matters worse, the mc is 10 years old in chapter 85, and the first 3 or 4 years of his life were covered in the first 15, so it took 70 chapters to tell only 7 years of history, which is especially bad if you consider that the MC is only 10 years old. age. These extremely short chapters and very slow pacing make me think that it will take at least 150 chapters before we start to see really interesting things, and with a posting schedule of just one chapter per day (the author stopped posting the combos of chapters in 3 days) it will take another 2 months to get to the "interesting part" of this story. I apologize if you hear problems with grammar and things like that, I used the translator to type this.

    Red Nara
    Anime & Comics · l_legolas
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1mth
    Commented

    Thank's for chapter, autor-san!

    Ch 21 Chapter 21
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze2mth
    Commented

    Thank's for chapter.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze2mth
    Commented

    Wathhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Asterion assumed that a forty-year-old prostitute, despite her years of experience, might not have as much expertise in using her own throat without vomiting as he did. 
    [HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
    Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze3mth
    Commented

    Voltage Nova!

    Ch 24 Chapter 16. Besto Frendo! (Part 1)
    JJK: Red Priest Pathway
    Anime & Comics · amattsu
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze5mth
    Commented

    I hope this character's distressing attitude and psychological drama doesn't last for long, because although it's realistic, it's not something fun or enjoyable to see in a fic. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year.

    Ch 32 Chapter 32 - Dilemma of Freedom
    Crows x Souls
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze5mth
    Commented

    At this point, it is quite obvious that the Protagonist thinks with the wrong head, and I confess that this really displeases me, to the point that I only continue reading for the purpose of curiosity. Anyway, Happy New Year.

    Ch 83 Pleas & Requests
    ASOIAF: Lord of Nature
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for chapter

    Ch 51 Epilogue03-The Crimson Feast
    The Dragonwolf
    Book&Literature · Gladiusx
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for chapter.

    Ch 32 Where The Wind Blows
    Reborn as Jon Snow's Twin - (Game of Thrones)
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Thanks bro

    Ch 27 Floating Adrift
    Reborn as Jon Snow's Twin - (Game of Thrones)
    TV · ssyffix
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Thanks bro.

    Ch 25 Ch25. Back to magic
    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Thanks bro

    Ch 24 Ch24. Crashing the part-, ahem, the court session
    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Posted

    Verry good story..................................... Verry good story..................................... Verry good story..................................... Verry good story.....................................

    The Dragonwolf
    Book&Literature · Gladiusx
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Tanks bro

    Ch 22 Ch22. Not today, buddy
    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Essa armadura em específico.... meh... vou apenas imaginar qualquer outra coisa que me agrade mais. Salve PT.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A New Life, a New Ambition
    Game of Thrones: Rise of the Witch-King(EN)
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    There's a guy named one890 reposting his story "In Naruto: Reborn with Talent" on Fanfiction.net. Sorry for the spelling, I don't speak English.

    Ch 37 Ch37. The prowess of battle alchemy 2
    Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze1yr
    Commented

    Tanks

    Ch 478 Ch478. Epilogue
    In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. What is the size of the population on your land?

    Ch 35 Ch. 35 Some come and some leave
    Highschool DxD: A New Satan
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze2yr
    Commented

    Eu sou brasileiro ( I am Brazilian), lei sua história desde que começou, e só tenho uma coisa há dizer sobre ela, é a melhor fan fic de DxD que já li. Parabéns e obrigado pelo ótimo capítulo.

    Ch 21 Ch. 21 Days off in Azura
    Highschool DxD: A New Satan
    Anime & Comics · Alexander_the_grey
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  • k1lausNamikaze
    k1lausNamikaze2yr
    Commented

    Bem vindo de volta.

    Ch 35 I’M NOT DEAD YET, BABY!
    Avatar: The Fire Demon
    Anime & Comics · Sin_O_Sloth
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