Uesugi

she is truly a saint. such mercy, much wow.

I recommend using apostrophes (' ') around internal monologues.

I know that this novel functions off of xianxia logic... but sharks and octopi/squids can't survive in freshwater rivers. The only partial exception to that rule is the bull sharks which have been rarely sighted far inland in the Amazon and Missossipi rivers, but they have a special adaptation. Tbh even with xianxia logic there are much better options (large catfish and a freshwater serpent/dragon or something).

Money is fleeting, Yuri is eternal.

Nobel is a Prize, Noble is a term used for the aristocracy.

tyftc <3

goodsoup

daoist white... 🤣🤣🤣

ayo