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DaoistOylL9F25dPostedSo far it's going very well. The system is original and not the typical OP cliché that gives everything to the protagonist from the beginning, many may be bothered by how weak the protagonist is, and to some extent it bothers me too, but it is refreshing to have a protagonist who he becomes stronger with effort, and not a protagonist who from the first chapter can already fight 1v1 against Darkseid or another character of that level.
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I don't usually like novels with systems, but for the first time I see a novel with an original system and not the generic system that makes the user incredibly strong instantly, a system with a lot of potential but not op from the beginning. This novel has a lot of potential.
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- DaoistOylL9F11mthCommentedA/N: I am looking for a nice picture for a female Saiyan OC for the future of the story. If you want you can comment on this paragraph I will choose the one I like best.
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