Wow this is amazing! Certainly awaiting the more of the story.

you read ' i have a USB drive'?

It's going to be a rewrite it he will pick from where you've left??

Yeeeehooooooo. A new chap.

guys i need some recommendations for some really good fanfic!!! tell me some!!

i read the first one. it's amazing. can you recommend me some more

wow this is so good

wow this is really good!!

yes pls

hey can you recommend some good fics! i would appreciate if it's a male lead. here's my list- 1) The vision- reincarnated as vision in marvel. it's interesting enough considering how OP vision is. 2) Marvel's dictator- country building marvel (a small country) Its good 3)HOTD a crab's dance- a house of dragons fic 4)house of dragon dovahkin- it's fun 5) saving the uchiha starting by destruction of leaf- i've read the mtl and its very interesting 6) house of the dragon baelon the mighty- very good!

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fantastic job! but what about cyborg wasn't he in batman's belt

Free top G yo haha

just awesome is what i would describe this story as! the character the pacing the interaction, i love it! keep going author. this is the best!

this was awesome good sir! your writing doesn;t disappoint the expectations! good work

man you're good and thus i declare my last stone upon your grandiose art

loved this and love you man!

very greek

If you want my genuine advice then scrap this novel in this site. And do a rewrite from the beginning. readers won't have the patience to read the story to see what changed. they don't know you or your story. save all of the chapters and then only use it as a guide of how the story progresses and write with a new style. i can see you are putting effort. but it's perfectly clear that you are a greenhorn. 1- scrap this novel. and save it on your pc. 2-use the saved novel as a guide to how the story progresses 3-reasearch good novels. Better stories earn money so that could be your motivation. 4-change your style of writing, again research everything. You need to have patience. 5- post your novel on scribblehub too 6- Interact with the readers but don't seem desperate 7- The most important advice (don't give a shit about anything i said and continue to do what you want) coz u do what you want to do

You can research other's story which are very popular. In scribblehub, royalroad or in webnovel too. take a pen and a paper and start thinking about why this story is doing good. remember in this site if you can present a story in a good way readers generally can excuse the grammar. everything you are writing is too constant, there should be fluctuations and your synopsis sucks. study the synopsis, story, style of other sucessful novels. You learn from the mistakes. after you write a story, keep your emotions down and read it from a reader's perspective. do i want to read this, is it good, are there better stories, is the character complex? etc One advice i will give you is research the popular stories. read each sentence and identify what this sentence addsto the story. donot make the reading monotonous. play with the emotions of readers as much as you can.