should be a 4 star but the unfinished characters made me drop a great read.. after a month of not fixing it I consider it on purpose so *<[( EPIC FAILURE )]>*..... bye bye

lame

how do you use Golden ticket?

stop being stingy..!! more then 1 chapters please .. cough.. cough er order lol. sorry to say this story is to epic so hurry hurry more more ahhhh I hate waiting ✋ ... crying 😢

vote just tap the page your reading and view is on the left side.. !! have a good one!!

BTW my ideals do not conform to a specified standard as each person on this planet has there own perception of every word or ideology ect.. so don't be offended please I mean no disrespect just voicing it as I how to help you help me have your world explode in my head. I don't know about others but when I get into a good book after a bit of reading the world melts away and it's like a movie in my head. books that are a bit lacking for me are just words with no substance. sigh I don't think I explained to my own satisfaction but that's all have a nice day. btw I have read over 1500 books a year as I have a weak body and illness so I still want to thank you for your efforts and work!!!

it's not a bad story or exceptional .. I feel like it's missing an integral element .. hmm charm and panache that makes the story pop 🤔 and reels you in so that you refuse to put it down. .. but take this comment as a grain of salt.. your not writing for me so just do what makes ya happy .. I am still talking it 😃

how do you use energy stones?? also I love this book !! long chapters!! epic story telling!! ahhhhhh ❤ 😍 💖 ❣ 💕 💘

a little interdepartmental romance is needed.. a wee bit. don't waste such gorgeous girls.. sigh

this story is very good and while it's good he is still an immature brat at his age even thigh betrayal happed with mad bullying people are so nice but he only sees negative thoughts from it.. he turned into what he hate the most.. he needs a wake up call.. I don't expect a hero but little kids under atleast 7 are innocent sigh..

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very good!!

love this book 10 stars as it's better than 2 5 star books combined lol Rad !@ keep up the good works!!!

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