Path_Liar

Thank you, that means a lot. And yes, writing original novels is my cautious hope for the future.

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Per the World of Ice and Fire, "House Tyrell sails pleasure barges along the broad Mander." Also, would love to change the weirdness in the interaction between them. Could you be more specific?

Yes, used it to slaughter a few dozen Ironborn in the first few chapters.

They're not trying to take the city.

Yes, both died in the cradle in canon.

I explained some of it on another comment here, you can check that out

Dropping or taking a break from it is not a problem, man. It’s the tone. Just hope you can speak to me like I’m a real person behind the screen.

No no. 200 men served as the vanguard that rushed to ambush the Ironborn camp. There's 800 total. Per Chapter 16, "Behind them on the slope below the hill, eight hundred men worked with the grim, unhurried energy of soldiers who knew they were going to be somewhere for a while." Which gives the total number of the force. And later: "Then, the captured Ironborn boy had talked enough that Arys still wasn't sure whether to feel sorry for him or not, and within the hour Ser Galad had the vanguard moving. Two hundred men at a hard pace toward the camp the boy had described, the main force following behind."

Do you think you'd ever say something so rude to someone in real life? Why wouldn't you just say, "hey man, didn't enjoy the last few chapters. Will be dropping the story. Try to work on "this" or "that". Good luck!" Why be intentionally hurtful to someone? What do you gain from it?