hello, I am the author of this book. I have no idea why I am writing this review. Please don't hate my book based on this comment! thank you for your time!!![img=recommend]

I understand that this does not fit into the rigid walls of a story, but I was disappointed to see that this was essentially a story that could be fit into two lines. People read realistic fiction to put themselves in other people's shoes and to see the world from a perspective that they did not know existed. And it is a sight for sore eyes to see an anecdote with insane amounts of potential be skimmed to an anti-climactic high. If I wanted to read a mundane anecdote, I would read the newspaper. The lack of emotion and feelings and thoughts and ideologies, is what makes this anecdote dry. If you are going to have a synopsis that is essentially clickbait, then please ensure that your work also lives up to its potential. Please take my words in a positive spirit. Work on -feelings -emotions -thought process and this will help you elicit a better reaction.