can you show proof of that and prove that your not some shady individual trying to steal the work of others for your own gain?

okay are you like a publication company or something?

come on guys start writing some reviews and give me feed back on what you think and how this story should get better! it's an all original work never before written so take part in it's creation and you can be given due credit when it scores big and becomes a best seller!!!

very interesting and inspiring book can't wait for more!!?👍

this story plot is fast paced detailed and growing I'm satisfied with where it's going but because there is no realism to it and it's purely fantasy I feel like I'm running out of ideas so ideas and or opinions thoughts ect is most welcome.

it could use some more development and as I proceed forward the plot thickens in my mind as to where this story might be headed. right now I'm at a stand still for this story ideas and support are welcome.

overall the story has a nice start hopefully it will get better and have more design and detail to it than it currently does right now. as for the plot I think it's highly interesting and very aspiring it's not like your typical american novels and has a slight hint or realism to it.

this book by far just keeps getting more interesting my opinion though as an author the build up in suspense of both the chapter and the release of chapters could be applied to increase in the interest of the book. all good things are best savored so if the author waits longer before releasing a chapter and tries a bit of cliff hanging with the chapters more than he has already I believe his reviews will sky rocket on this book with how good it already is.

this book keeps getting better and better and is very inspirational in regards to detail orientation and helping one find a better way to be detailed.

interesting story I think I'd like to read the entire thing before forming an opinion