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  • Lew_Jonh
    Lew_Jonh3 years ago
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    The novel is good, but a lot of the information is nonsensical and some of the MC's actions are illogical. Chapter 160 it is unclear what he did to the Elf is a mystery in other chapters it is not described what happened. He knows a lot of forbidden techniques, but doesn't know the evil double cultivation of using women as a cauldron of cultivation.

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    Lew_Jonh4 years ago
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