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DasNastry

DasNastry

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2021-02-27 JoinedUnited States
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  • DasNastry
    DasNastry3yr
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    ****Author didn’t want to write evolutionary path ****

    For now, he chose not to make the sacrifice.
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
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  • DasNastry
    DasNastry3yr
    Replied to DasNastry

    Hate the messagIng system on this app. makes my sentences come out like a second grader and I cant Edit them after i post. Hope you understood

    Ch 57 Final Battle (3)
    altalt
    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
    detail
  • DasNastry
    DasNastry3yr
    Commented

    I just like his strength is jumping too much. In this chapter Otto not survived an atomic blast with a single instant cast spell. But then later states he doesnt dare take on the arrows of a few thousand mages. Then later the villan states that he tells his troops to stop because they wouldnt hurt Otto anyways... I’m okay with OP but it needs be consistent. You walk a fine line between being so OP its all boring vs constantly havIng fake or unrealistic challenges even with small things. Thanks for the story tho

    Ch 57 Final Battle (3)
    altalt
    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
    detail
  • DasNastry
    DasNastry3yr
    Commented

    So both spells he already on the boots he gets a copy of now? Id be upset with the tower... Or the authors creativity....” cough “

    <Lesser Blink>
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
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  • DasNastry
    DasNastry3yr
    Commented

    This chapter has no point to it It does nothing for the story just some dumb sci-fi fanboy easyer egg

    Ch -5 Prologue (5) Collateral Damage
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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