Nice plot with a good background I also like how the characters were described and how detailed the story is. The suspension and mystery is very good here.

It means that she was really fed up with life tho the characters commit suicide, is words not in the right order ?

Which line (°<°

I will try to fix it guys thanks ~~

I like the background of the actions , also the characters are well described a mysterious circle around the characters is interesting indeed

I like the background of the actions, also the characters are well described, having a mysterious circle around the main character is important to build good fantasy story.

I like the background of the actions , also giving the side characters the lead is something really interesting , keep going author ........

I like the historical background of the actions also the characters are well described my poind would be about the names, that it's not common to remember

Hey there_ since I have started this book I'm planning an eerie path for this story in a world close yet far from reality. Waiting to hear your thoughts about it, I would appreciate helping with improvements

I like how deep the description of the scenes is making you imagine the view well and leaving a nice philosophical impact on readers ......

I really like how the characters images were described, it makes me interested to imagine those pretty characters in the novel scenes.......