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So rule of cool?I mean does he needs to be even more different or more cooler?He is already top of the class, ring maker at 11 years old, have anime silver hair, genius, best friend of Harry Potter, charismatic chad, friend of Slytherin girls, has immortality, stops aging at 22 years old. I mean what more different does he need?
And honestly, why would you even want elf ears that's just handicap. Because people or ministry will consider you non-human and they could even put you under beast category, like warewolves.
Their divine like beauty also. There is reason Legolas is fan favourite 😂😂
No worries mate. I quite like this story, it's believable and canon characters are well written. Inly complaint that i have is that you said that MC will have pointy ears, because lotr elves didn't havr pointy ears that's a Peter Jackson idea adding that to movies. But that's just me being LOTR nerd and i will not be dropping this story just because of that. Thank for you work and i hope you enjoy writing this because that is the most important thing.
Elves in the books never had pointy ears. That's a movie thing
Elves of the lord of the rings books never had pointy ears. That's a movie thing
Hard agree. I hate those stories with all my heart
Tch and Ack, classic asian comment👌
So, why his interactions with Sirius need to be normal.Magnus is complex weird guy, and that's okay. I mean i can't imagine him having normal convo with Sirius. Magnus is sirius guy Sirius is not. So they would kunda clash. So weird convos between them IS normal.
More plot, less fluff.
World building but just right amount, don't over do it.
Slow
I don't get why you are making Mangus feel betrayed by Flitwick. Headmaster asked to speak with student, seem pretty normal to me. So why he is feeling betrayed, because Flitwick doesn't share his opinion of Dumbledore?
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Hhahahahahahahahhahahahaha, oh my god that is golden😂. Win her heart Pfftt