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HAHA! PB-Lead-PB-Lead. I was hooked after that. The little details are what show a book's true worth, and this author definitely put the time in, to make this book amazing. Thanks for the great read!

If you take the time to actually read this novel, you won't be disappointed. It has the charm necessary to be lighthearted, but isn't overly dramatic like other novels. Solid piece, thanks!

Spot on! The writing is smooth, and vivid descriptions + world building make this a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see how the plot develops, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. keep up the great work Author!

Can't wait to see where this novel goes. The writing is fairly good, with few grammatical or spelling errors. Great effort. Thanks Author!!!

They say don't judge a book by its cover. YOU SHOULD DO IT FOR THIS ONE! The book is as amazing as the cover. I read until I ran out of book. A+ highly recommend.

The story is a little slow, and the descriptions are somewhat lacking, BUT, for a first novel this is great! The writing is amazing with almost no errors, and it's fluent and smooth to read. The story does feel slow, but with some tweaking could be really good. I'm excited to see this author grow. Good luck! [img=recommend]

Well written and vivid descriptions of all characters and scenes. The author clearly put in the time to craft a quality piece of writing. Great Job!

The story is well written, and I can tell that with a few more updates, will become an amazing novel. The plot is somewhat cliche, but the author makes it their own, and I kept reading. Good Job!

HAHA! The story may have started a little slow and confusing. But I read just a little longer and was pleasantly surprised. The punchiness, humor, and action mixed together make this a great novel. It is honestly succeeds at swaying your emotions and reactions, which I cannot say for many novels. Keep up the stupendous writing!!!!