Everything in this storry is good i found very little spelling erose i love it never stop wruiting its amasing what you do everybudy deservs to see your storry haveing a good plot is part of the tric and i think you did everything i like [img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update] love everyone the the the the the the the the the the the the the thje the the the the ufp8f 8w0t0[32h' ikreg'0oe u]0 u9 t8hy239[8t 09u]09]t- vu]w039 tuv903 4yvt945yt9034iu3]90u [498ut931[8yhti[gcbi;hgi9yt983vyur[98u[3hiufgergfuluy uigq98ty398 y98ty3894ty9 9[3 83ty

i love it

i raelly dont like that its one chapter and i feel that if you had more chapters that it would be beter i howerver like it so far so please update soon

i lovr it