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Keith_Potato1mthCommentedCh 36 36:Transformation[2]- Keith_Potato2mthPosted
Quick review . Another book from the author of DXD: Shadow Monarch and Danmachi: The Blind swordman. All of his books are good and I'm expecting this too to be good. So far the story setting is good, which is the one piece world. But not any just main character from one piece , the mc here is the father of demon slayers which is Yoriichi. now this is where it gets exiting because I'm curious how Yoriichi will live here because he is a child here and we're at one piece world . will he still learn breathing techniques ? or will he have a devil fruit ? or just haki ? If you're interested in finding out, you should definitely read the book! (potato out, rate it also if you found it good)
- Keith_Potato2mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Fateful Encounter
- Keith_Potato2mthCommented
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"Yoriichi" Boy replied in a soft tone to the girl, as he continued to stare at her without saying anything - Keith_Potato2mthCommented
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The child has fair skin, maroon eyes, and long spiky hair with red tips that he kept in a ponytail and a weird mark on his face which didn't make him look ugly at all - Keith_Potato1yrCommentedCh 4 Chapter- 3 Joining Familia
- Keith_Potato1yrPosted
Danmachi but with mc with haki!!?? blind mc but kinda strong like fujitora from one piece!? Female Bell!? no wayyy! This one is good is a good danmachi fanfic, i read some other danmachi fanfic here in webnovel and this one have the most potential to become the best danmachi fanfic here in webnovel , the pace is kinda good maybe the characters lacks some communication but hey the author is a new writer and it seems he's improving in his past chapter in patreon, i suggest your read this there's nothing going to lost to you, it's worth it. that's it potato out :>
- Keith_Potato1yrPosted
it's great, the writer is new and English is his not first language so the grammar is understandable, the grammar might be bad bit it's still understandable, the story is good it might seems confusing at first but i suggest you not to judge it, you should try it first then give your opinions. that's it potato out :>
- Keith_Potato1yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter- 2 Guild and registered as adventurer
- Keith_Potato1yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter-1 Adventure begins
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he then moved his head nervously towards the old man who has his eyes closed this whole time.
He then moves his head towards looks old man nervously who has his eyes closed this whole time. - Keith_Potato1yrCommented
just like this 5 minutes have been pass but there's still nothing unusual happened.
He waited, 1 minute past then 2 minutes, like this 5 minutes past but nothing unusual happened. - Keith_Potato1yrCommented
'to' get 'a' very bad feeling...
He looks around him sees to everyone mana tool started to manifest now, he starting get very bad feeling but he shook his trying to shake off this feeling. - Keith_Potato1yrCommented
he shook his 'head' trying
He looks around him sees to everyone mana tool started to manifest now, he starting get very bad feeling but he shook his trying to shake off this feeling.