A classical story with a team of agents from a more modern perceptive. A female agent with personal issues to deal with and a male agent that sees her as an equal in the field. Good work.
Keep it up
A very promising start. A smart main character that has a good understanding of the world instead of the usual lucky-daydreaming main character. Keep it up. You got this.
This is the first rebirth story i have ever read. And i like it very much. Interesting plot with flow. I can see the potential from the first chapters. Keep up the good work.
Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess
Interesting story. It is more casually written than other books but thats ok. Nice flow with a relatable character. Tom is the kind of character that the reader feels sorry for but he has potential. Keep uo the good work.
You sure know how to build up the tension. Well done. Nice flow with a growing suspense. I like that the first two chapters introduce the separate and different life styles of the main characters. Keep up the good work
