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AVAHouou

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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to BardN_x

    Sadly, the novel just didn't keep up with its initial momentum. The Immorra Arc and a couple other events were pretty poorly executed, too. I took a break from reading it after around Chapter 220, so I don't know if things have changed for the better.

    "I guess I truly am a part of this world now..."
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Really well said.

    A'Ling too acts in the same way, spontaneous in all her actions—perhaps even too much. But you, A'Xu, are the exact opposite. You don't want to be wrong, and so, you are never right." Here Xinzi stopped, but his words were like a stampede of raging bulls ramming through Chun Xu's mind. Her hands trembled around the gourd, and her eyes turned red.
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to Evil_Dao

    Interesting, thanks for the answer!

    The quantity of Spiritual Drops condensed in Qi Refinement pretty much decided the size of a cultivator's Qi Pool. The cultivation method impacted the quality, and when additional forces such as Evil Qi and Divine Power joined the dance, unpredictable results became the norm. Qingxin had seen and accomplished too much in his lifetime to be surprised by the oceanic size of Xinzi's Qi Pool. It was staggering for sure, but not something that defied his understanding.
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Author, is there a way to increase the Qi pool's quality and size in the world?

    The quantity of Spiritual Drops condensed in Qi Refinement pretty much decided the size of a cultivator's Qi Pool. The cultivation method impacted the quality, and when additional forces such as Evil Qi and Divine Power joined the dance, unpredictable results became the norm. Qingxin had seen and accomplished too much in his lifetime to be surprised by the oceanic size of Xinzi's Qi Pool. It was staggering for sure, but not something that defied his understanding.
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    What a plot twist! Nicely done!

    Ch 106 Never Doubt Heaven's Fairness
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Superb, and thank you for the quick response, author!

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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Can you please add the levels of weapons, artifacts, and formation array masters? I'm confused regarding who is stronger: a profound-grade formation master or an earth-grade one. To add, if you could provide a barebones description in the story as well, it would enrich the text and clear doubts. Thanks in advance.

    Ch -3 Cultivation Realms & Co.
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    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to HalfX
    Unable to endure the blow, Xia Hu lost balance and spurted blood. Nearby, Chun Xu observed all this from a sober and conflicted stance—trapped between shame and regrets. Had she not pushed Xia Hu to draw his sword at Xinzi, he wouldn't have ended up in such an...unfortunate state. In a land of rigid moral standards, neither man nor woman, Xia Hu was destined to endure no end of jeers and ridicule. It would be a miracle if his psyche survived the future ordeals. And all that for what? Just to watch his beloved blow Xinzi's meat and birth his babies. 
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    My goodness, this summed it up pretty well. The pity we feel for Xia Hu is immeasurable.

    Unable to endure the blow, Xia Hu lost balance and spurted blood. Nearby, Chun Xu observed all this from a sober and conflicted stance—trapped between shame and regrets. Had she not pushed Xia Hu to draw his sword at Xinzi, he wouldn't have ended up in such an...unfortunate state. In a land of rigid moral standards, neither man nor woman, Xia Hu was destined to endure no end of jeers and ridicule. It would be a miracle if his psyche survived the future ordeals. And all that for what? Just to watch his beloved blow Xinzi's meat and birth his babies. 
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to AVAHouou

    Typos: I have never such a short* It feels like he is somewhat experienced with writing* Apologies for the errors.

    Ch 60 Big Sister Xia
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    I have finally caught up to all chapters in 24 hours. I must say, I am addicted to this story. I never read such a short(total chapter-wise) and so far incomplete novel, but the synopsis and reviews gripped my attention. Although, out of consideration for WebNovel's readership, I suggest making the synopsis less convoluted. And now that I have read so far, I can say I like the story. The author has talent. It feels like he has somewhat experience in writing but is also trying out something new and daunting. Despite the story lacking in several departments and a few minor plot holes, it is so far highly enjoyable. Nice work, Evil_Dao!

    Ch 60 Big Sister Xia
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Respectable. And, I agree.

    I can't be a critic if I'm afraid to criticise myself.
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    How to Raise Your Regressor
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    I laughed out loud so hard!

    "Oh right, there won't be a next time. So you're stuck with a 7."
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    How to Raise Your Regressor
    Fantasy · Anit666
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    The sheer maturity in this story amazes me. Despite a few glaring flaws in structure and form of the plot, the story shines most in its characters. Especially our protagonist. This is a beautiful example of, "the characters make the story", and I want you to know that you're doing an excellent job, author. Even with its flaws, How To Raise Your Regressor is a great story. Keep it up!

    "Of course. The concept of 'meaning' itself is subjective. It was Dynogaur who wished to die, and it was Dynogaur who died. It was about him from the very beginning, so who are we to decide whether that was pointless or not? If those events were fulfilling for him, then fulfilling they shall be."
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    How to Raise Your Regressor
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to Mohammed_Albayati

    Thanks for the answer.

    'It looks like consuming the [Seed of limit] helped my body become stronger...considering that an acid of ph1 is nothing to me anymore...'
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Replied to AVAHouou

    There is an extra "a" and "later". Sorry for the typos.

    "I guess I truly am a part of this world now..."
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Superbly done, author. Good insight, inner turmoil, and character development. Such a achange to oneself may later shock our protagonist later down the road, as he realises what he has become. It may create self-hatred. I think you should consider this point. Good chapter!

    "I guess I truly am a part of this world now..."
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    This was simply brilliant. This entire chapter so far completely and accurately encapsulated the struggles and inner thoughts of our protagonist. One can clearly see how much the author has improved in his writing. The fear of becoming someone you no longer recognize, making a decision that would permanently change who you are, and slowly dying within till you become an empty, withering husk, are fears so deeply-rooted that most ignore them and choose to go with the flow. Challenging something like this is frightening, and I completely understand the protagonist here. But what we must do is understand ourselves better, and learn that changing in a way your past would not hate you and your present could be satisfied with is alright. Well done, author.

    '...maybe transmigrating here was just as much of a blessing as it was a curse.'
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Highly clever.

    The reason why I was drinking it was so that I could blend with the crowd. If I didn't drink it, in the event that there was an ambush, there was a high chance I would be among the first who were targeted.
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  • AVAHouou
    AVAHouou2yr
    Commented

    Great chapter, since it provided momentary peace and relaxation from the action-packed chapters it followed. Also, it provided good insight to the protagonist. Despite its flaws, I can see your effort and dedication to the story. Keep it up!

    Ch 35 Elective [1]
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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