Han was alrea inform that Mara was suppos to be a doppelgänger from the guy in the ring

A couple notes here in reply To some other comments 1. Most predators Also go after the weakest spot on they’re Prey soinch As the rearend and they wilol Also start there to open up they’re Prey when then Hide is tough making an easy Entrance nce For the internal organs 2. You have to remember That (little girl) is not a little girl and is intelligent .she might have some issues with communicating with Han but she’s almost a creature similar ar to a tamed loyal pet

You would think with his coin skill he could have a good number of various types of tamed pets to help. Or even if he would use his knight when he’s only with these bigger creatures

It’s Odd that with all the skills and pets keep going unused such as the disloyal al Knight and that coin skill, one would think it would be very useful In times of trying of escaping Or hunting To keep things slowed down and hinder creatures Or enemies

I’m Very curious As to how the population of this location became larger all of a sudden since previously it wasn’t on top of the fact nobody had a clue where this peninsula was or where other humans where in relationship to they’re portal.

Your numbers on all these stats never make any sense, coma’s and decimal points randomly make it worse and putting thousands and million together just really through me off. I try to just scan over it all but it seams kinda useless and to throw in () at the end of things doesn’t really help either. It seam like it just filler for the paragraph. Sorry after all this time reading I just had say something

California Is on the west coast for one thing and your use of decimal Points In the stat areas are so haphazard azard It drives me nuts. Anyway

Since it later says 10 pm,that actually makes it 22 hundred if your going by the 24 hr rule in hundreds. Just an fyi.

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Seams that this novel is in the wrong category since I picked out of the completed novel section. I've also seam to have most this somewhere else because at the end of this little it gets really interesting and I'm talking about this fight that is going on right now.

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