Leicchi

if she already had 10,000 war souls, couldn't she use it to leave? i think i missed a certain piece of info

Bland characters, bad world building, plot progression seem forced

i'm asian, if you think 3kg of rice is too much for one day in an asian family, then think again.

Author-san here! Forgive me guys, but allow me to be shameless this time and give my work a 5 star hahaha! Here's what to expect in reading this novel: -Firstly, the world will be a world of magic with a mix of eastern fantasy. There will be spells, and there will also be cultivations. -Second, the mc will be cautious most of the time. And only at times when it has something to do his family will he be careless. He will also be overpowered. -There are some annoying young masters, but they'll be dealt with immediately unlike those of the classic cultivation novels. -There will be things like bloodlines and martial souls. Beast taming will also be there. -Mc might be socially immature sometimes, but it was all due to his past experiences and he'll grow in time. -There will be harem, but it'll only be a small one with at most three members. And I'll try my hardest to make it as natural as possible. -Lastly, there won't be kingdom building, but it will have an army building of some sort. I might have forgotten some points to include, so I hope that you guys could give my novel a read and find out. Please bear with it guys as it is my first work ever, and I hope that you could live your ideas and critical comments so that I could further improve. Thank you so much!!(≧◡≦)

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUYYUHYUUUUUUUCK...reading 200+ chapters, enduring heart-wrenching tragedy moments for the sake of holding on until mc became op only to find out that he would start all over again.........

The story is good, and the exciting fighting scenes and complicated human emotions are well-expressed. The concept and its explanations were described excellently. However, there are instances when the author tends to overly describe things. Details are good, but too much will just make it look like fillers. Some scenes or paragraphs could have been described with fewer yet concise words, but it was written so long even if they didn't contribute to the story. For me, details are not everything, description and narration using few but concise words are more attractive.

he transformed that time when he escaped from the Malone family's place right? then why the f did they only notice now that he has a bloodline? did i misread or its the author that is fault????

can anyone please enlighten meeeeeeeeeee...after all the creampies, why the fck did none of his wives got impregnated yet?!!!! aint dragon bloodlines supposed to enhance a man's virility??? wats happening.........dont get me wrong, i love the story a lot.

Hello, I do not have vast experience in writing novels, but I do know that every opinion and review is valuable. Therefore, I would take this chance and express my thoughts about this story. First, there are no significant grammatical errors in the story. There may be some in each chapter, but it does not hinder understanding the flow of events. As for the development of the story, I think that while it's great and well thought out, there are chapters that are 'somewhat' insignificant to the story that I think can be described in shorter words. This is also related to another issue regarding this novel. I don't think I have the qualifications to advise a writer since I have no experience regarding that. But, as a reader, I think that the author likes to give too much detail in describing things in the story. For example, the author will explain the logic behind something that still has no significant role in the current phase of the story. I think that instead of going into too much detail as something was introduced, it would have been better to just give some overview regarding it until it becomes significant to the story so that you can describe these efficiently and timely. Why am I giving such a fuss regarding it? It's because I think highly of the story and it drives me mad to see the story progress, but it irks me that some chapters that aren't too far from being cheap fillers are present. It's good to present the story of side characters, but going into so much depth that causes the story to somewhat lose its luster is not very good. As for the character design. In my opinion, the author did very well in describing and giving color to the characters. Each of them has their personality and identity, causing their interactions with each other very lifelike. As for the updating stability, I have no issue or opinion regarding that. Lastly, for the world background, the author did excellently. The author did not give too much nor too little information, instead providing just enough description about the world and its power structure. Overall, I think that the story is good and is worth a while. The only problem is still the use of too much info in describing certain things and the chapters that resemble cheap fillers.

what does this mean? why is he counting the number of black grades techniques he has from his father's inheritance? are there no such techniques in the God's inheritance? clarify to me something, weren't all the black techniques his subordinates have come from the inheritance of the God?