Alma_Night

Thanks for the chapter

What nonsense is this? Jon was born and Lyanna died much later than the fall of King's Landing. Ned managed to visit Storm's End and lift the Tyrell siege on his way to the Tower of Joy. Either the author doesn't know the chronology of the Baratheon rebellion, or this is another piece of garbage written by AI.

Bro, I don't know if you'll make a good fanfic, but for being the first person to write about the damn paywall, I'll believe in you. And yes, I completely agree with you. Paying for a damn fanfic(!) is pure insanity. Not even for the original work, but for a FANFIC!!! There's a separate cauldron in Hell for all these geniuses. And this comes from an atheist. So yes, to Hell with them.

Just forget about Hermione. How much longer can you think about her?

Yamato

I'm dropping this fanfiction. The reason? The main character is a stupid idiot who contradicts himself. He thinks that he shouldn't interfere with the characters from the original story, but he still does. Either the author intentionally makes him a fool, or the author is a mediocre writer who can't come up with anything original and just follows the original plot. In short, I don't recommend this to anyone who values themselves and their time.

First you write that Translucent's head exploded, and then you describe his face. This is the most idiotic use of AI I've ever seen. At least check what you're publishing. Not all readers are blind idiots

To be honest, it's a little annoying when an author tries his best to emphasize his racial identity. I'm not a racist, but when the same thing is repeated three times in a minute, it's a little off-putting. I have nothing against Chinese fanfiction, but how often they emphasize this. And unnecessarily. They can convert fictional currencies into yuan or engage in philosophical nonsense. They obviously hadn't heard the saying "In Rome do as the romans do." Oh well. As long as it doesn't affect the plot, I can tolerate it.

What other Overmind during the Dominion? Author, do you even know what history is? The Dominion was founded by Mengsk after the events of Starcraft 1, and by then the Overmind was long dead and the Zerg Swarm were divided. I just found a fanfiction about one of my favorite games, and I was immediately disappointed.

Thanks for the chapter