I Kinda have a love-hate relationship with this novel. On the one hand, the word building is great, writing quality above average for this app, and some characters are amazingly written, while on the other hand, the author put so many twists into the story that it is mind boggling I mean [Spolier]- The dude that kills the Mc's family is first reincarnated as Edward kills everybody then he somehow travels in time with op abilities and kills best girl ( not really kills her but still ) there was no foreshadowing or anything just this is the plot now and another thing that I just can't really take in is the fact that he knows that the system master is manipulating him, watching him and altering his memories yet he does nothing about it just says thank you like wtf !. Writing 9/10 Story Development 3/10 ( To many things happen with no foreshadowing, and no warning just fells forced [ to me]) Character Design 7/10 ( Some characters are great and have amazing development while others are just forgotten and altered [Take The Half elf as the example, for 70 chapters, nothing on her yet out of the blue and for no good reason (except a kiss) she says she is another reincarnate and she was violated in her world so she is NOW JOINING ANTY-EDIN like wtf why butcher a character] Update stability 1/10 ( No comment) World Backround 10/10.

Thank you for the Chapter.

After nearly 400 chapters, I am finally leaving a review, and the only thing i can say is that it's amazing. This fanfic is the only book on this app that I actually waited for the new chapter releases and enjoyed the jokes from the translator he really did some work on this fic I have read some of the original and i can confidently say that it doesn't have the charm of this book. GOOD JOB, Bleam, and keep it up.

(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.

The goddess that send May to this world is here

Duke Shawcross is here

May is here

Thank you for the feedback, and I promise that it gets better the further you go

seems about right

This is real. A man managed to convince 29 people to end their lives because aliens were going to destroy the world on a specific date and if they didn't end their lives on another specific date they won't go to heaven.

I cringed writing it now you must suffer

It is explained further in the story. Thank you for reading BTW, and it gets better the further you get as my writing improves

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You heard the Pen*s

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L'histoire est celle de Yuri, la femme principale, qui est introduite au chapitre 42, merci d'avoir lu et désolé pour mon mauvais français.

Don't read this book. I am only writing because I want to not for it to be read