Endless_Reader

what an idiot, whenever you complete your work before time. always make sure that you show how busy you are so that no more tasks are assigned to you or no else disturbs you

After being in coma for more than 6 months, no muscle loss. Great, just great.

What is that wish, I want to know, uhhh

Could he not have created money out of thin air?

Author, the book doesn't support power stone voting. Wait for a while, at least a week, before the voting can be enabled for your book.

You're welcome☺

My intention is not to demean your work, just giving my opinions and sharing experience while reading. If you find yourself offended, well then my apologies.

The plotline of the novel is good, and I as a veteran Webnovel reader find much potential to be unearthed. One thing I would like to suggest is the tone of dialogues for different characters, it feels as though same character is speaking for others as well. It might be subconscious action, but I think someone would find it uncomfortable while reading because I surely do. However, if you work on it, it might get better with time. Good luck for your future endeavors.

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