ehhhh.... so shortttt

I think that it's a bit too fast, making the story a bit too.... bland. The pacing could be better, but I'm interested to see where this goes.

I think that the plot sounds a bit interesting. It sounds more unique than most hero summoning novels. I think that they should write more descriptions for everything though. Also, it kind of skips the characters. The chapter length is nice though. Not too long, but not too short.[img=update] I do want more though. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

Interesting sounding plot. I like where this is going, but the writing up to par with the unique plot. It doesn't mean that it's bad, I just think that you should describe some things better. Like, the guns should be described. I had to search up multiple of these weapons. I like it so far, 4/5 stars.