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Well like most other fanfics, starts really well early and goes downhill. Mc is basically aimless with no goals except d normal overall of not dying and even that he’s not really good at it. Cuz given d world he’s in, he’s pretty weak compare to truly powerful. Gives out powers, weapons etc like an idiot with no hidden backdoor if it’s used against him, doesn’t bother giving out ones that are not as powerful or advanced as his. N d rest of d time is just spent doing any and everything. That’s it in a nutshell without info dumping.

It’s a good read but it’s pretty much just like all d other novels that write a “Demon” mc. It ALWAYS turns into a supposed demon playing human, and then becomes a human who just happens to have a demon form/powers. Or human soul in demon body….. blah blah blah. And I’m pretty sure it’s gonna get revealed that Mc was Human- past live(s). Given all d memory foreshadowing thing. Eh🤷‍♂️ Good book

It’s pretty much a bad copy of and idea. Original - HammerTime

Only issue really is d forcing d whole be part of Konoha, and I must appear good, build prestige and all that. There’s no need to have Everbody settle down in Konoha, and having to play games. Could have been focusing all his energy on researching, exploiting resources from d other villages and basically doing what he wants , when he wants n just having 1 or 2 ppl to get stay in Konoha.

😩Man ppl like forcing hero complex things. Of all d architypes, everyone wanna write fix it heroes, even when it makes NO sense. Get dropped in a world where ur life is at stake and godlike beings are around and BAM, literally first decision dude makes is Imma save her(Vicki- not HIS sister, but ok NP), second decision???Imma save her(Caroline ) third Imma save him(Tyler)🤷‍♂️ guess u can call it wish fulfilment fan fic. Y’all pls put wish fulfilment in d tags or something so we can’t expect anything.

Just pointing out- Mc is weirdly narrow- minded and being kinda foolish, his character is somewhat flat , as in he following d system framework like a bot. He knows where he is, he knws his actual rivals/enemies are gods, super humans etc. He’s hasn’t done any planning or structure his growth to be able to deal with it until he sht went south, rather he’s focusing on doing normal criminal things. Dude shld be logging and planning to steal things that can help him- kryptonite, batman level tech and gadgets, whatever DC equivalent of super serums, metals are etc….. And I knw there’s still a lot of time to actual do those, but 50+ chapters and dude hasn’t even thought or made initial plans for them yet is why. Annoying reading bout someone with foreknowledge, deletes their common sense.

It ain’t gotta be an all revenge story, there’s actual a LOT of room for growth, just hope u stayed on d other side and not go d route of “Oh, someone showed me care and love , now I’m gonna protect them “and all that- basically a variation of heroes/antihereos. Dude can carry out his revenge, and also work to grow stronger, it’s DC after all u got broken beings around, Can even add a bit of faction building- smoke Zeus, get Olympus, train an army that can do sht for him, I.e fight darkseid parademon army, chase artifacts/things of power to grow stronger….. 😂Lemme stop, point is We got a LOT of potential PLS don’t do any variation of hero, friends with d JL, reluctant hero, or any of that.🙏🙏 I’m really tired of reading them 😭

Overused AI/ used AI entirely, leading to repetition, and inconsistencies. gotta balance it.

Take it back. Author fumbled. Ion knw how d book did a complete 180. Mc turn into d typical template. Some variation of d hero template, childishly arrogant, barely thinks,Pokémon women.

First reviews are bots. Idea is good execution is terrible. Novel itself makes no sense.