Theomancy
Hello everyone I am an author and reader. I am here to have fun and to share it with everyone!
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I like the beginning of the novel as it drops you in the new world. The main character is well fleshed out, you don't need to see multiple interactions or situations to understand the character. What does need work is the world background but then again, only four chapters have been published... Overall, it is a good read and would recommend it to anyone. Author, you better not drop it
I love the novel, it has a wonderful start at the beginning by suddenly dropping you in the story. The only problem I have is the world background. It needs more detail and development but that problem could be solved as the story progresses and more chapters are installed. It is too early to tell and I encourage other to stay and read.
Wonderful author and story in the making here. The story is wonderful and has amazing concepts. The character design is well flushed out and has realistic personality. THE MOST AMAZING PART IS THE UPDATES it is very hard nowadays to find a good author that has stable updates. OVERALL WONDERFUL AUTHOR AND MY BEST WISHES TO THEM!
my guy it is sugar
The author does a spectacular job in this novel. He is able to quickly give the reader information without during it into a info dump. He quickly establishes early on in the novel what the main conflict will be (No I won't tell you) and is able to create a well-fleshed out main character. Overall I will continue to read this novel and will on the look out for updates.
number 1 mother
Hey guys it is the author of the novel giving myself a shameless review. I am making this to tell you guys to please leave reviews of my novel as they help with me writing the novel as it tells me what you hate and like, I prefer that I write something that you like, and it helps me with the creation process.
Don't worry it will come very soon!
This is a wonderful story that takes themes from the common life of the reader during this time of "unmeasured growth". Its characters are well flushed out and allows the reader to relate to the characters on a personal level. It is overall a wonderful story in which I will be watching closely for updates!