the period is just a way for me to organize my thoughts. my eyesight isnt very good so i put the periods there to help me tell where the breaks are and how many. generally the amount of breaks is how long the "pause" is between story beats or ideas, or at least thats how i try to organize them in my head

Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to me, I usually don't get a lot of them lol but it's honestly really nice to get any amount of feedback, even just minor things like spelling mistakes are super helpful

i wish i had the money to comission some art lol

Aisha prefers cuddling face-to-face :3

Aisha is about 4'9 at that point in the story.

oop! just a typo, thanks for pointing it out!

thanks for continuing to read!

See chapter 90 - thank you for the comment!

Ah, reading back, I realize that you're right - it was my intention to convey that Aisha was losing the fight, (rather badly) but I realize now that I rushed through the scene far too quickly, and have given the impression that Aisha was on top the entire time. I will definitely add and change a few scenes to try to fix this. Thank you for the comment, this was super helpful!

Oh, these are supposed to be the entries that Aisha have read. I'll try to make that clearer!

Thanks for the follow up! This is genuinely very helpful for me, and I'm glad you took the time to write. I do rewrite and change chapters of the story often - I'll make them clear in the author notes in the future. But again, thank you for the honest feedback!

no, at least not for the foreseeable future.

ah, my bad. Fixed

Thanks for the criticism! I'll keep that in mind. What I had intended was for Aisha to slowly care more and more about her friends and other people, and how she treats them - but if that wasn't made clear then I will be sure to try and improve.

thank you for the comment! <3

Maybe! That certainly is a good idea, although I do have other side stories lined up. Maybe I'll make a poll.

thank you!

You might be reading too much into it :P. The demon Aisha killed was male, but the demon inside of Aisha is flat because Aisha is flat.

that's great! Im so glad you think the action was good. To answer your question about the part where Aisha grabs the demon's leg - She is sharing her mind with the shadow, and that's why all the thoughts come out as her own. Thank you for the comment!

Thank you! You have no idea how much that means, thank you for the comment, and for sure I will try to flush out some of the other characters in the story.