Hmmmm, rwby could actually be pretty interesting. Maybe if I treated dust crystals like temporary evolution stones? I'll have to think about it a bit more but that could work. thanks :)

To be honest, I've lost almost all interest in my hero academia over the past few months. Ruined not only progress on this story but one other released story and one other unreleased one. I still have a couple other things I've been wanting to try out in other settings and plan to finally start working on my first fic now that I've narrowed down a proper setting, but I'm going to stay away from my hero for now. As for doing something with pokegirl, I'd have to think about it. I'm not sure what other setting would make sense for Eve and what she can do. If you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them. I'm not opposed to keeping the setting in my hero but in that case I very likely won't pick it back up until the manga has finished so I know everything I have to work with.

King ended up answering a lot of the questions so I won't answer them again, but I did just go over the wiki again since I'm thinking about trying to move forward with this story and I did notice a few little details that might say you're on to something. still, as far as we know for now, the quirk moves on to another host after being passed on. that said, with the way the original quirk is worded, it appears to have always meant to be passed on to multiple people at once. It's essentially the exact opposite of All for One (a little on the nose too) where one person has access to a stockpile of quirks. The quirk was supposed to transfer to someone else and absorb their quirk as well and possibly give both the previous and current users access to all assimilated quirks, basically creating something like a hivemind. My current theory is essentially the only reason the quirk can't be passed on the multiple people at the moment is the quirk AFO ended up giving his brother. the stockpiling quirk is basically making it impossible for multiple people to use the quirk without training since their bodies can't handle it. basically AFO's philosophy that only one person needs to be strong directly hindered the true potential of One for All. I'm actually fairly confident now that this will be the big twist at the end of the story. the stockpiling part will be taken and the true purpose of the quirk will be revealed. I will also point out two interesting details that I noticed, which is all the previous users of One For All died shortly after passing on the quirk with most of them passing it on while fighting or right before they fought AFO and died. And bakugo apparently still has a bit of the quirk inside of him from the movie which was confirmed in the current chapters of the manga. As for All Might, the quirk did in fact transfer from him, BUT, I think it's only the stockpiling part of the power that went away. So I think you're half right about that. we've seen him several times inside of OFA's consciousness so maybe he can still make use of the other stored quirks? In any case, this will be the theory I'm going to be working with for this story.

er, not sure how I missed this one, but that's not exactly the case. Detroit smash is just a straight punch using 100%. it's his most versatile attack since it can basically change depending on the situation. and he didn't use it from a distance, he grabbed Eve first before throwing the punch. the scene I had in mind is basically the first time we see him use it against the slug/slime villain in the first or second episode/chapter.

I would like to continue it someday but honestly I'm a bit stuck with it since a LOT of what I had planned needed to be scrapped. the story was originally part of a shared universe with 2 other stories I intended to write but had to cancel for various reasons. Major parts of the story were reliant on characters from those other stories making appearances to wave away some of the more contrived stuff like world travel, but now I'll have to figure out how to get to those parts while making sense without them. I do have a few ideas ready to try out but I'll have to see how they work. Still...I guess I can go a little further with what I already have ready so I might put out a chapter or two soon. I'll probably have to go on hiatus again though, if that's fine?

no, sorry, I just forgot to share a bit of bad news on this site like I did on scribblehub. Unfortunately, I'm going through a bit of a medical problem at the moment and typing is actually very uncomfortable for me right now. I might be able to force out a chapter or two in a while but for now, writing is ill-advised.

discussing lore isn't really useless per se. at least I find some enjoyment in doing so. unfortunately, we don't actually know if she was any weaker after losing the quirk. we don't know how long after she passed it on nor how long she actually trained All Might before she died. my theory on the matter though is that all might, after his injury, could barely hold on to the quirk because his body wouldn't let him which is why his burnt out in less than a year since he was already on a few hour time limit. Nana on the other hand was perfectly healthy as far as we know and she wouldn't have needed to use 100% in every encounter. So my assumption is she could carry the embers (it's the analogy all might used btw) for a few years before they depleted. kind of like a gas tank with no way to refill it I suppose. After all, all the power is stored in the quirk. if they pass it on, it doesn't really make sense that they could keep drawing from that power. I mean, if they could, wouldn't it be smarter to just give OFA to a bunch of people at once? actually, it probably would be smarter to just do that since it seems they can hold on to the quirk for at least a few months anyway. hmm, something to think about. I wouldn't be surprised if that's how the manga ended, with deku giving the quirk to all his friends somehow to beat AFO.

sorry for the late replies, I had to take a break from writing for a week. In any case, that is incorrect. After passing on the quirk he no longer has it. Indeed his body wasn't allowing him to use it anymore before he passed it on, but once he passes it on it's gone. that's why during his last fight with All For One he says goodbye to OFA. the quirk very literally passes itself on, the previous wielder no longer keeps it in full. after passing it on they keep a bit of the embers inside of themselves but it is no longer infinite and will slowly deplete over time.

nah he said he'd explode trying to use it

Not exactly, it's using the quirk without training that can potentially cause harm to a person, not just having it. That said, she is a pokegirl. they are uniquely suited to handling large amounts of power. Plus I never got around to mentioning it but she has also been experimented on to a degree and that will allow her to uniquely make use of OFA in a different way than just the standard "I'm super strong now" way.

who all might? he doesn't, at least not anymore. he's fine for now just like in canon but he will slowly start to lose his powers over the next few years if he uses what he has left sparingly.

what makes you say that? I don't think i've gotten to a point where it might be relevant yet

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Will do! and thank you for reading :)

Unfortunately I dislike Wattpad about as much as Webnovel. It's just really hard to navigate and for readers to find stories. Same with Fanfiction . net and the near non-existant tag system. That said I am considering uploading to FF as well. I'm also heavily considering starting to post over on Fiction . live that way I can interact with my readers while I'm writing. That site is normally used for quests and has a lot of technical issues though so it's still under consideration.

It's the same one for here, Pandoras_Library. I haven't posted the story yet but I should be able to upload the current chapters by the weekend.