If you don't care, you shouldn't be triggered but it seems to me you have hot red chilly up your you know where, ready to burn others, everytime you have the chance.

Looks like someone can't take criticism at all, ready to bite back when someone does not agree with you. And yeah, I use fastpass to unlock chapters and don't contribute anything to you but I will still say my piece.

You are not alone when you call someone your friend, I read this chapter a bit bit late but this was a huge letdown after what happened in the north camp, this chapter shar over everything.

Man, have you dropped this novel??

At least stay True to your Words Man!!

Dude!! Are you gonna update or not???

dude, why are the updates so irregular?

Man! As far as I have read this seems really boring to me. The only reason I keep going is because the premise is interesting and the MC honestly feels like a loser, hope this changes soon.

It is a fantastic read!! I have only completed about 36 chapters but the novel is really immersive and I thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters. The characters are fleshed out well and Mc is not always in the spotlight, in fact all the members of his group get there fair share of glory. All in all a good start and hopefully it will improve more in the future.

dude your story is awesome and I love it!! one request though- please announce if you are going premium bcz I like to stockpile and it would hurt if I had to open chapters that I could read before.

I think the worm was literally blown to dust with nothing remaining.

Could you reply a bit?? I have seen novels involving power struggle going down this road quite a bit. Just want to know if you have something in mind for that??

Maybe 'One Shot Man'😜😜

Well I have to say one thing, the conversations are kind of bland like they knew this was going to happen or something and the relationships feels kind of forced, you should work more on how to bring emotions out. You know there are many expressions like his brows wrinkled or a glint pass his eyes and whatnot if used correctly they add a certain charm, so probably go for that( maybe🤷). and lastly I will suggest to read some more novels of the same genre to learn how to express yourself better. Good luck with your writing👍👍.

Don't you think it would be better to wait and read more chapters and get the gist of the story rather than giving it a bad rating straight away😒😒.

She said she could kill a first order beast but not easily like bai zemin did with the shadow tiger. Perhaps more in line with the fight Mc had with the beetle, by giving her all and defeating it.

Man your story-telling and the way the novel is progressing is very fresh and unique it's almost like reading a manga and I thoroughly enjoy your novel. So, I wish you best of luck with your novel and please carry on the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend] .

So, you gave him a bad rating because he couldn't take critisism well and not because you found the novel bad??🤔🤔 With review like yours that just happens to drop Novel's rating without any valid reason at all,No wonder he is trash talking😒😒.

Don't know how the story will turn out but reading the first chapter, I was really impressed and this looks like a fresh story. The grammer was good and when he broke down crying, that hit a chord. Great start Author!! Hope you continue this in upcoming chapters as well and turn this into something genuine and interesting. Good luck writing[img=recommend][img=recommend].

To be honest, it seems a little extreme. Well Parents at most can abandon their child but no one will gut them without feeling any remorse, especially the mother.