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Karthik_suresh2yrReplied to Karthik_sureshRepeated use of this word over many chapters*
Surrounded by two demons, a lone youth stood in the middle of the battlefield. Behind the two demons was another demon.- Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Sorry, but just got to get this out of my chest. Please use other words to signify ren’s age. The repeated use of this word makes it feel cringy
Surrounded by two demons, a lone youth stood in the middle of the battlefield. Behind the two demons was another demon. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Xavier’s a A rank…. Istg i rlly am lost in the power level stuff now. If a D rank can easily kill many F ranks, how easy will it be for a A rank to end a D rank… well lets see in the next few chaps ig
"... Its about time I got rid of you lot" - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Tbh idt it shld be written as a device. From a programming perspective, it would be better to say it is a software on their system. Moreover in their current world which is technologically advanced it would barely take an hour to implement a device with the program. Since ren destroyed monolith, in his opinion, the system would should be down for a while, before the monolith can get it back online
Having destroyed a major part of the Monolith, I wasn't necessarily worried about them getting the chip tracking device functioning fast, but it was better to get it solved as soon as possible, given the fact that by now I should be one of the most wanted people by them. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
How did he lift his hand… didn’t the nurse say he had third degree burns. Is he still under the influence of monarch’s indifference?
Out of habit, lifting my hand and placing it on my chin, I started musing to myself. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
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This book has been deleted. - Karthik_suresh2yrReplied to Arid_Landscape
No… how is it ‘and’… its contradictory if you use ’and’
Silence once again descended in the room as only the sound of the figure's breathing resounded across the room. - Karthik_suresh2yrReplied to JimmyBlah
Read properly. Its a writing tech used wrongly. Instead of ’as’ it should be ’before’. Lol
Silence once again descended in the room as only the sound of the figure's breathing resounded across the room. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Huh? Then the small tap?
None of them were worried about someone overhearing them as both of them knew that the rooms were soundproofed. - Karthik_suresh2yrReplied to JimmyBlah
Wdym
Silence once again descended in the room as only the sound of the figure's breathing resounded across the room. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Hmm this part is contradictory
Silence once again descended in the room as only the sound of the figure's breathing resounded across the room. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
How is she smiling, isn’t she a ice cold killer
"No, I'm not." A warm smile appeared on Amanda's face. Looking around, she asked, "Are you alone?" - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Psychopatci big brother thingz
On it was a small GPS tracking device that I had installed just in case someone tried to kidnap her. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Ah true friendship
Whenever he got beat up by either Monica or Donna I would instantly feel better. The same went for Kevin who gloated whenever I got beat up. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
For the love of god, please stop using the word nod in any tense frequently, I beg of you dear Author. Your book is amazing, its just that some words & actions are repeated too frequently
Nodding my head I moved towards the center of the training ground. Both Donna's and Monica's full attention was on me. - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
Idk anym man.. I love this book but every single interaction had a nod…. What even…
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She is not worthy
'Ren, you've found an opponent' - Karthik_suresh2yrCommented
DAMNNN THIS PARAGRPAH’s worded amazingly. Your writing has improved so much author
Spotting me, he held out his hand with a warm smile. He gave off a good first impression, like an older brother next door. Competency aside, it was because of the impression he gave off that he was chosen to be Amanda's assistant. - Karthik_suresh2yrReplied to Karthik_suresh
Tbh its quite frequent thats why. Sorry if my comment sounds rude
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