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Hello Author, I think your novel is good, the premise is good and the skills and powerleveling seems fine as well. he only problem that I have is with the cringy romance. Don't get me wrong romance is a key element, but you make it too cringy( at least for my taste) I have read about 60 chapters and in the last few I was actually nauseated with all the mentioned romance- like cuddling a lot, kisses on the cheek and constantly use of Baby this, hubby that and bla bla bla. I ask you to maybe work on that( I hope you will) and lastly good luck with your novel.
His demeanor is that of the past Ryu, so the arrogance and his behaviour is instilled in him because of that. But he probably does not realise that he is in his second awakening because he never once mentioned anything remotely related to that. I never once saw him brag about anything, its never mentioned once. THe sky god is the supposedly the highest existance, so the trial will be tough and as author said you need the mental fortitude to witness his journey.
Author Just Slapped all other MCs who are known for their "UNIQUE" features.
Firstly I will say 'Best of Luck ' and would like to ask will you continue to upload chapters here