You made this so much interesting...nice plot...nd the plot thickens... dont know y ur story is not atleast 4.8 stars thou

Deep gratitude for bringing Technoblade's story to life. Your narrative skillfully honors his legacy, offering a poignant and engaging tribute. Thank you, author.

Why r u calling yourself an idiot? You have literally read all the chaps. 1 star seriously ,after everything.

It's good. New world arc after the yggdrasil game arc is well writren you should try for yourself first.......................................................................................................................................................................................

Very nicely done...almost all the other overlord fics ends when they reach the new world.....they create so much build up in yaggdrasil ....but then they don't create anything for the new world...you... yes you sir are different...you are maintaining the new world arc remarkably...and i am all for it.

Lets share this piece with others ...........................................d.o.t.s...o.n.l.y................................................................

Idk the first monologue was so relatable that it is sad. Never really put an effort to change the things..always being passive in live...good story though

Re:do the healer??

Ben 10 fanfic!!!!!! Hell yeah!!!!!....................................................................................................................................................................................

Not even 10 custom made demon king fanfics

Awesome interactions, i just hope he knows or come to know about his mother's killer.

Thanks for 2 chapters consecutively.

Age limit 70? It was 69,69 right

Great read.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I like systems👍🙏💪🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🤯🤯🤯🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍

Its good.. ............................just try it...........mmm.. . .................................................................................................................................

Love it

Yes, i am dumb , your from brazil

How can a single human write this? If you truly did this alone and came up with that Twitter scene? Script? ..oh plot! Then you are amazing and i am truly motivated and impressed by your work and dedication to write something for stones for each chapter!!!! This story is l like the "perfect" spiderman story and am all for it.