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Lance_slvolsky3yrCommentedI imagine this sentence for the comic outline.It suits if your story published in Webtoon
Because It’s a Psycho thing and Welcome to my crazy world.- Lance_slvolsky3yrPosted
The writing quality was very nice and smooth details even though there was some deep words but I could easily recognize and understand the world.I also want to emphasize your world background,Borderline Personality Disorder was so sensitive topic but I definitely approved your story for perfectly describes the awareness.
- Lance_slvolsky3yrCommented
I loved it even though I couldn't undestand some words but 😂 I like the written quality
She outstretched her bare arm, the rain droplets splattered on her fingers. Feeling the cold raindrops caressing her fingers, she tilted her fingers upwards. Her languid gaze was stuck on the remnants of the drops running downward like tiny rivers. - Lance_slvolsky3yrCommented
the beginning😍
The darkened gray blanket of wool enshrouded the sky; like a predator would encircle its little prey. The wet season wasn't supposed to start for another couple of weeks but the darkened gray smudges were a clear indication of rain. A low rumble rang loud in the cool air, startling her a bit. - Lance_slvolsky3yrCommented
Nice descriptions.I imagined it
Almost without hesitation, the young man sucked the meat out of the claws as if he were eating a crab, and swallowed it together with larger pieces of tougher meat. - Lance_slvolsky3yrCommented
The strong sentence.Wow!
By a stony creek in a valley, a black-clad young man was holding a black beetle with a metallic sheen that looked like a cross between a crab and a Hercules beetle.