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Lance_slvolsky

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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Commented

    I imagine this sentence for the comic outline.It suits if your story published in Webtoon

    Because It鈥檚 a Psycho thing and Welcome to my crazy world.
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    It's a Psycho Thing
    Contemporary RomanceMS.CHINITRIXIE
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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Posted

    The writing quality was very nice and smooth details even though there was some deep words but I could easily recognize and understand the world.I also want to emphasize your world background,Borderline Personality Disorder was so sensitive topic but I definitely approved your story for perfectly describes the awareness.

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    It's a Psycho Thing
    Contemporary RomanceMS.CHINITRIXIE
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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Commented

    I loved it even though I couldn't undestand some words but 馃槀 I like the written quality

    She outstretched her bare arm, the rain droplets splattered on her fingers. Feeling the cold raindrops caressing her fingers, she tilted her fingers upwards. Her languid gaze was stuck on the remnants of the drops running downward like tiny rivers.
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    Imperfect Desires
    Contemporary RomanceXiaoMeeHee
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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Commented

    the beginning馃槏

    The darkened gray blanket of wool enshrouded the sky; like a predator would encircle its little prey. The wet season wasn't supposed to start for another couple of weeks but the darkened gray smudges were a clear indication of rain. A low rumble rang loud in the cool air, startling her a bit.
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    Imperfect Desires
    Contemporary RomanceXiaoMeeHee
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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Commented

    Nice descriptions.I imagined it

    Almost without hesitation, the young man sucked the meat out of the claws as if he were eating a crab, and swallowed it together with larger pieces of tougher meat.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fiTwelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Lance_slvolsky
    Lance_slvolsky4mth
    Commented

    The strong sentence.Wow!

    By a stony creek in a valley, a black-clad young man was holding a black beetle with a metallic sheen that looked like a cross between a crab and a Hercules beetle.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fiTwelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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