you really like to use the word intimidate in place for acts of SA and Rp. you should fix that.

so you failed them and now, when you need to be the teacher for them, you run away. how "responsible"

she's straight up about it. can't ask for more than that

in the manga he cut off his arms

crocodile, not along besides, beating a warlord is more impressive.

you really are just copy pasting the same dialogue. too bad.

I mean, congrats on missing the point. its not like consistency with your writing is important to make sure it's easy for readers can understand your work. not like that's the point of being a good author... but sure. let's just ignore that and make it the readers job to put together the puzzle of poorly structured writing.

yea, doesn't change my point though. if anything, the fact its translated makes it more important to edit and double check the translated work before you post. just to make sure those issues arent common.

I really hope this doesn't just shoot this story in the face and leave it bleeding in the street. like it usually does when this reincarnated child of mc shtick happens.

what? you need to rewrite this.

makes it seem like his had his foot cut off.

you dont need the "I have some impressions" part. doesn't sound like naruto, seems far too robotic, and you'd still have the same point you were trying to make without it.

pointlessly convoluted. coulda just cause jinwoo became ashborne when he succeeded his power and became the next shadow monarch, so just as jinwoo is ashborne, he is now you, just like you are both jinwoo and ashborn. simple.

him.

stupidy seems to be your only consistent trait. don't change it now.

dont mean to be that guy, but, he's reincarnated, he's in his late 20s by now I think. 7yrs old in this life.

that's basically a blank check given to a God, a petty powerful being that looks down on you simply because you exist.... that should say enough about why it's a bas idea.

you mean sexually assaulting... not intimidating... two different things.

the denial part about friends hurting friends to such a degree i get, that clearly makes sense, but not about Guy teaching a justu to him and not them... that makes even less sense since knowing jutsu that others don't, even in your team, is key standard for ninja. even in the same teams since each member has strengths and weaknesses... every genin team is that way if you look at their skill sets with only very basic jutsu like transformation or substitution being standard for them all... and the 8gates is a forbidden jutsu... just like Kakashi teaching Sasuke chidori but not Sakura or Naruto... it's the character type and proficiency... even with Guy since he specifically trains them to their strengths to make up for their differences, teaching them things that the others don't know or making them more proficient in certain skill types to help balance them as a team.... tenten learns all the weapons and ranged skills... Lee gets physical attack based taijutsu training... and Neji gets defense and Chakra skills and literally hyuga training added to his arsenal...

way to downplay how neji treated Lee and his reasons while you did nothing the entire time ten ten