DogmaticNonsense

why is misty confused? shouldnt nurse joy be the one asking since she'd never seen a devileon before?

you mean Octavia?

now I'm excited for the next chapter...

she's throwing a hissy fit and not listening now and you expect her to listen there? suuuree...

couldn't think of any other motivations? just a horny dude with a Chinese ff young master mentality?

? did you mean "youll be the blood and fire, but i, will be the monarch..."?

youre losing consistency in this interaction. misty and Brock were with ash when they first saw her there. she knows Casey met with ash, she shouldn't be surprised. I think you need to reread your last 3 chapters and edit.

I was so confused for a minute xD

oh, really? but even the dialogue is different? if thats what it was supposed to be, I missed it lol completely went over my head.

didnt you end the last chapter with her seeing him and hugging Pikachu? why is she acting like that didn't happen? you rewrote the interaction too.