Akil_Andre

why does this book keep coming up opended everytime i go back on this app

your story is not bad but your writing when progressing is getting repetative in making a point about lucian . i would also like to think that the fl should be avey because how your put your story it seems like her and his family were essentially brainwashed to ignore him for the plot of the world he's in. the other girl having her be there and her relationship with the mc seems forced and would make no point for them to be together with him and her especialy with how she wants to kill some or most of the people who will eventually grow close to him as a yandere and him who loves his friends and family wholeheartedly and she will eventually kill someone.

it is the most stupid book about traveling back to the past and getting a system that does nothing and takes a while to perform song in public

this book is okay if u want an undiscive character that cant seem to choose if he wants to be with shogun who this stupid book has in the title all in it frustrating and overall a shitty read

r u stupid he can change her and shes a banshee

let him become a civilian

the writing is TRASH your story make no sense main character is just shit with horrible quality and its just a plain crappy story that should not cost coins beacause its not worth it to pay to read that garbage

i 1000% agree

new pink and blue