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sori_Ed3yrCommentedCh 58 Shao Cheng Will Check Ren Yuan Body Later On, Free Of Charge- sori_Ed3yrPosted
when I first start this story, it give me a nagging feeling that it would be like "heaven official's blessing" but the more that I read ,more different I saw. characters personality and overall of story development have a big different with that story. even if MC is a little weak for my taste but generally it's a interesting story with so much mystery that Keeps you curious and thirsty for more.
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you start eating so soon
Long Aotian felt like he had a very long dream. Even since he was hatched my parents never bothered spending time with him. They were too in love with each other to care about their children. When he was young he always wanted to cuddle up as a family and sleep together. But father always wanted her attention only on himself. Now in his dream he felt like he was coiling around something very warm. He felt his body being softly caressed every day. He felt someone talk to him in a soft voice. The thing smelt like the ocean with a pleasant sea food smell. He just wanted to take a bite of it. And so he did. He took a big bite. - sori_Ed3yrCommented
dear ML you should take responsibility of my baby! how could he find a good husband with this reputation!?
"Don't ever build your nest near the clear river. There lives a perverted man who likes to touch himself there. Look at my son ahh. He unknowingly got the habit of stoking his underbelly with his wings, looking at that man," the raven cawed emotionally to one of its sisters. Just like that a new rumour started spreading again all living creatures inside the Nevada forest. - sori_Ed3yrCommented
it's so much! XD
The same thing happened every day. The nearby raven saw the man put his hand inside his pants and confidently stroke his jj in public. The raven was mortified by this. She tried hiding her fledgling's eyes everyday from this perverted man. - sori_Ed3yrCommented
author San! don't destroy my baby innocent! :o
The raven nearby was mortified by this sight. Quickly hiding her fledgling's eyes with her wings she said "Oh my god this perverted man. Look at him using food for his pleasure." - sori_Ed3yrCommented
lol
A little raven perching on the trees nearby looked at this sight and thought "poor kid he seen to be speaking to his jj ah. Maybe he is not able to get it up or he is just trying to motivate it by speech. Either way Darling you should not grow up like that man" it told its young fledgling. - sori_Ed3yrCommented
it's really awkward!!!!!!!but still funny!
The trees leaned by themselves offering their flowers to Xia che. "Thank you for your help." He waved the Lillium tree and ran towards his river. He started looking around for some small rocks to mash up the flowers; to make a paste. He pounded the rocks until the flowers were made in to a paste. He gently held the paste in his fingertip; opened his pants and applied it on the wounded snake. - sori_Ed3yrCommented
it's look like ML would be a black bely one!!!
So just like that poor little Crayfish ended up having his jj being coiled by a ugly snake for 6 months now.