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HybridUchiha5mthReplied to HybridUchihaBeen getting back into it, though, so please do consider reading it. I put a lot of thought and planning into my chapters to create a somewhat cohesive story.
This is technically a rewrite of the 1st chapter since it felt rushed not only to myself, but to some of my readers (I'm talking about you, camo), so I've decided to completely rewrite it and turn it into 4 separate chapters.- HybridUchiha5mthReplied to Lc_The_Second
It's still a WIP. I am just very inconsistent with my chapter releasing, which I apologize for. I reach writers block very quickly and have to plan ahead before I continue writing. I also tend to write chapters in advance, and release them later on, once I've written enough chapters. The reason for the recent releases is because of the fact I haven't uploaded in so long and I felt bad, so I speed typed those chapters in a few days so I could have a release.
This is technically a rewrite of the 1st chapter since it felt rushed not only to myself, but to some of my readers (I'm talking about you, camo), so I've decided to completely rewrite it and turn it into 4 separate chapters. - HybridUchiha2yrReplied to Cup_Of_Cappuchino
I'm only referencing Boruto because it takes place after Naruto, and putting my character in that timeline would have been a huge mistake since so much has already happened there. My story even takes place after the events of Boruto. I'm not going to act as if the show never started. I will acknowledge its existence, but I still will never like it.
- HybridUchiha2yrReplied to Cup_Of_Cappuchino
I'm not necessarily trying to make the character personalities canon. Plus, I've never seen Boruto, so I don't know their current personalities. I even changed Sasuke's Rinnegan loss. I'm not really trying to go for Boruto canon since I don't care for Boruto as a show. I fell in love with Naruto and Sasuke, and now there's a show that's making them complete and total ants. Not having it.
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Thanks for the review. I try and keep my readers engrossed to the best of my ability. I'm also trying to go off of his rough backstory from my 1st book featuring that same MC. Like most younger siblings, there is a lot that is just handed to him, but not everything. It does get more difficult for him as time passes, and I will definitely try and improve on the way I write as I'm still very new to writing. My main goal is a 1500 word minimum per chapter, and 2 chapters at a time. Once again, thanks for the review, and I will definitely continue improving as I take all of my readers input, and try to change things to better suit to what they want to read if that makes sense.
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What can I say? That's what happened
"What I mean is, Ninja, as I said before, haven't been seen in a couple centuries. You've probably been trapped in that ice for at least 215 years." The man drops him, creating a thud as he hits the ground. He turns around, closes his eyes, and takes a few steps. "I wasn't trapped. I put myself there to get away from my leadership duties and responsibilities to my village. I thought I killed myself. There must be a reason I'm still alive...which is how I'll leave you and your remaining men if you forget you ever saw me." He turns around and looks at the boss with his cold, red and black eyes. - HybridUchiha2yrReplied to Zuuhed
very. may as well bring Skyrim Shouts into this
Well, it couldn't even be considered an attack. That was basically the same as throwing an Iron Hammer against a Glass Window, the two simply couldn't be compared. The Iron sword was slashed in half, while the Steel Sword barely got any collision marks. Juri was sure that even if he brought a hundred Iron Swords here, that single Steel word would destroy all of them! - HybridUchiha2yrReplied to HybridUchiha
Their parents*
If he gathers the last 100 kids of his Tribe and tests them, it will be a miracle to get even 10% of them with Yellow Aptitude. This added to his conviction that the Varen Tribe's method was legit! Still, he kept testing every single kid until all the 283 present ones were tested. By now, he had no doubts anymore. Even if he extrapolates and says that this number was all due to luck, the number of Yellow Color aptitude would be too much! - HybridUchiha2yrReplied to ramingo
It did say from 0-10. You would think that would include them unless Juri specifically told his parents not to bring them. It would just place them amongst the 30 that weren't there
If he gathers the last 100 kids of his Tribe and tests them, it will be a miracle to get even 10% of them with Yellow Aptitude. This added to his conviction that the Varen Tribe's method was legit! Still, he kept testing every single kid until all the 283 present ones were tested. By now, he had no doubts anymore. Even if he extrapolates and says that this number was all due to luck, the number of Yellow Color aptitude would be too much! - HybridUchiha2yrCommentedCh 7 The Varen Tribe
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FRIEND??!! HE KILLED LYON!! HE WOULD STILL BE DEAD HAD IT NOT BEEN FOR SYSTEM AND YUNYU TRANSMIGRATING TO THIS WORLD!! FRIEND? I DONT THINK SO!
Instead of maids or butlers who took care of him, Javier shooed them all and said that he would be the one who took care of Lyon until he fully recovered. The servants had no saying in this, because Prince Javier was the Crown Prince of Golden Camellia, and was Prince Lyon and Princess Layla's long-time friend. - HybridUchiha3yrReplied to cherlyswan
🎶Have a "Holly-Jolly" Christmas🎶😏
[… I JUST WANT TO GET LAID!]