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I don't think you meant that her eyes were rosy pink...maybe her cheeks?
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Why shouldn’t the errors be pointed out? Do you want the readers to constantly fight with trying to figure out what is really being written and conveyed or would you prefer a smooth written piece that readers can enjoy much more? If you feel I’m being too critical, then it should be corrected prior to being posted. Have a blessed day!
pulled
leaving her here
smile I had
talking about it
going from bad
could see each
seating
Why does this
inching
mesmerized with
at that time conveniently
not go broke
puts off