it is the first time i tried to write my own novel so it sucks '-'

Let's goooo, it's finally coming to the good part where there would be a lot of fighting and a lot of behind the scenes actions.

three birds with one stone, i like it OWO

this fanfic has been re:written and edited again, but the outcome has been wonderful for the change, the beginning of the story has been more clear and made it easy to understand what he would be able to do, the writing quality has also been improved quite well with it being much more easy to understand.

thank you for the chapter :3

ok, it's good for those that haven't read it yet and a little something for the ones that did, i see that you changed him for a clone too, great addition, cause of the Naruto element you put at the beginning, now as I'm one of the ones that has read the last one before this rewrite, I'm now looking forward to what you would change in the fight that's about to come, well good luck to you :3

thanks for the chapter :3

Yes, it's becoming great again, the setting is kind of the same as the last one but now it's much better and more organized (although it took time to organize my view of the story cause it's colliding with the last one, it's all good), can't wait what you would do with that type of setting, good luck :3

thanks for the chapter, now it's becoming interesting again, with you now doing your own writing and not completely changing it to satisfy the complainers, well good luck to you :3

I'm starting to lose interest, the one you were writing before was better not gonna lie '-', you need to step up your game author, good luck :3

i feel like I'm just reading a description on Google and not really a novel in this chapter '-', well imma let you cook.

I have to say that the novel that you were writing was already good enough and was becoming more interesting and it's also improving, now imma take a look at this rewrite and see if it's good or not if it's not then byebye, anyways good luck :3

Yeeeeess, and thank you for the chapter :3