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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting3mth
    Replied to Sebastian_Clark

    I have continued it on scribble hub. I find WebNovel is a bit too clunky for my liking

    Ch 237 The Marshall's Office
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Stan_God_Lee

    It was a little bit of a reference. At the time of writing my sister was obsessed with this show and I couldn't really escape it.

    Worst case scenario, he was dead. If this was some sort of afterlife, then it was either hell or purgatory, or something along those lines. No 'Good Place' could possibly permit the possibly literal brain crushing headache he was under.
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Stan_God_Lee

    Well, piloting takes a fair amount of work to do even if you aren't really moving, so he really just limits his intake. The ice cream is just a lil treat.

    He broke out the bucket of ice cream he had received, and got in position to watch the show. As the engines on the missiles roared to life for a second time, they left a white cloud in their wake that was eerily beautiful.
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    Dead Star Dockyards
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Stan_God_Lee

    You aren't going to believe this . . . but there is a glossary with pictures and details on Scribble Hub.

    Ch 32 Preemptive Strike 4
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to TheHighElite

    Well, if it makes you feel better there are a few more chapters out on Scribble Hub. Italicization exists there, and there is an actual glossary.

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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Colter_S

    This is more a reference to CV-6, USS Enterprise, the actual ship the startrek Enterprises are named after

    "Your ability has the potential to place you among figures such as Erich Hartmann and Manfred von Richtofen. The combination of your skill, this ship's capability, and my computational and data analysis ability, has the potential to leave a mark on naval history at the same level as the Monitor, The Dreadnought, The Enterprise, and The Immortal."
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    Dead Star Dockyards
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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to HaremBeGone

    I have been posting it to scribble hub and r/hfy on reddit. There is actually more of the story over on scribble hub, in case you wanted to catch up to where I'm at (only like 5 chapters or something)

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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Arktus

    I haven't played that out yet, but it won't happen for a while.

    Ch 153 A Set of Expectations
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Arktus

    Made it yesterday to post the render, its r/DeadStarDockyards pretty empty at the moment.

    Ch 154 Great Powers
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to Arktus

    Mercedes is being kept out of trouble on the Noah, can't have her peeing on somebody's floor. She's still alive! She just can't do much to help considering the fact that she's, you know, a dog. In spite of that, she is trying her darndest to keep Donovan and Diana happy and healthy (in the form of her morning walkies)

    Ch 153 A Set of Expectations
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    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to InfinityDragon

    I have plans for something like this, but the Sanctum is a lot different than other powers. In essence, they are extremely bureaucratic in relation to just about everywhere else (save one) to the point that the expenses from producing and maintaining such crystals are simply untenable. This is sort of background that I wanted to introduce later, but Sanctum script was proactively introduced by the first holder of the 'Librarian' title as a means to record what little history they could and archive it. Once we get to the actual academy you will start to see something similar.

    Ch 148 Gag Reflex
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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting1yr
    Replied to InfinityDragon

    I went over this earlier with the Scholar, but they DO have a system of writing, its just that only a fraction of people working for the Sanctum have learned it (and those from the Holifanian Theocracy). I have plans for the 'everybody else' version of recordings, but you are right that they are incredibly expensive.

    "This one seems . . . odd?" The Scholar stopped on a specific page, reading it over and over again in disbelief. "Why didn't anyone want to take this one in? I don't know much about combat but she hardly seems like a liability." He handed it over to the Marshall, some part of him thinking he might be delusional from all the pages he read.
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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Posted

    Quality of writing is high, word choice and use of grammar are well above the standard. The story itself is also very compelling, though due to its brevity actually going over it in the review would defeat the purpose of reading the book. I see this book as a level above others on the sight, though I do wish it was a bit longer.

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    Morphing Iniquity
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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Replied to sagewukong91

    Eventually. MC aint even out of a diaper yet.

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    Of the Stars, Sun, and Moon
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  • cakeonfrosting
    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Posted

    Heyo- author here. This work is almost exclusively the love-child of my free time in college and boredom in said time. Do not expect the best writing quality, stability of updates, or consistency of character goals (story has a general direction I plan to take it). In return, I expect to be derided heavily for errors, called out on gross inconsistencies, and dragged through (not over) the coals when I make grievous errors. Constructive criticism would be nice, but not by any means necessary. In essence, this novel is the culmination of the ravings and fantasies of a colossal idiot in written form. I can only hope you enjoy.

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    Of the Stars, Sun, and Moon
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    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Commented

    Yes, we’ve been trying to reach you about your car’s extended warranty

    "Oh? You came?" I asked with a smirk.
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    Fourth Prince's Debauchery
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    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Commented
    I smiled wryly. Yeah, it sounds pretty terrible.
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    Fourth Prince's Debauchery
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    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Commented
    I smiled wryly in my mind. For an instant, I wondered if I should take Rose out of here.
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    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Commented
    "Sigh, it looks like this guy has a guilty consciousness," I smiled wryly as soon as the guy left.
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    cakeonfrosting2yr
    Commented
    Katherine smiled wryly. "I don't know if it will help, but thank you."
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