Muito bom ate agora gostei muito do inicio da historia, porfavor nao deixe ela muito virgem, ou seja nao deixe ela ser amigavel com tudo e todos e ter muita piedade com todos os tipos do pessoa
You have a talent for writing, I really liked your idea of using a straight female lead instead of yuri as 90% of the platform, hopefully in the future you can keep bringing these stories with female OC without yuri
Mano, she's going to join root ?Even though she already knows the plot?. Please don't make a sunny character who forgives everyone or at some point forgets what happened, for me she should aim to destroy konoha
If you can tell the truth to sasuke about the real reason for the massacre and about his brother, it would be nice to train him too after all many fanfics prioritize Naruto a lot and develop relationships with him