Thanks for the chapter. I can't wait to get back to the main storyline.

The flashback stuff is interesting but honestly, I personally don't care so much. I feel like just doing the initial meeting would have been enough of a flashback to let us know who the princess is, and this level of flashback honestly feels like its own different story. Thank you for the chapter

agreed

Lian li is so adorable now

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Honestly one of the best novels on this site. I started reading it for the "plot" and then couldn't stop reading it because of the plot and the "plot". The story is written well, updated daily with a new chapter, you can tell as you read that the author has a plan for where they want to take this story and they do a good job of showing that in their writing. The characters all have depth to them, granted some characters kind of get thrown into the whatever pile after a while, but the main characters are almost all given at least a background story which develops a little over time. The author does a good job of placing the reader in the world. All together great novel, usually these types of novels almost always end up as just very basic wish fulfillment novels, and while this one does have some aspects of that, it does a good job of balancing things out.

same lol

cant wait for more of this

indeed we do

thanks

I hope so, because this was extremely cliche

So far I like the concept behind the novel, the base storyline seems pretty decent with some cliches but one thing i hope improves is the grammar and the consistency of perspective. I usually don't care too much about grammar but the grammar so far is extremely bad. If you have trouble you can use free online grammar checkers as they tend to help out a lot. I know I use them from time to time.

xp

xp

cool start

cool

xp

thanks

watch her get stuck in the door

thanks