Soul_Parade

can't you just edit the names of the 5 elders?

why is wanda here? it's too early for her to appear

Interesting start. Let's ignore first that this is just fiction, but if a person loses 1000cc of blood, that person goes to shock (hypovolemic shock) or atleast it leads to shock, cause it's about 20% of the blood volume that's circulating in our body.

what chef template did he get?

too much talking nonsense. 55 chapters in, too much talking and no advancement of the story...boring. just make minato the hokage already, too much talk of ideals, the past and future.

apparently i was wrong, kong became fleet admiral after the edd war. sengoku became the fleet admiral sometime after the ohara incident.

wait, kong should have been a fleet admiral for a long time not just promoted. he was a fleet admiral in rocks era

or vice versa

i think the first few chapters were indeed a copy of pokemon master of tactics

why can't they correct Gaban's name? it's frustrating reading the name Jabba, it reminds me of star wars.