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Let the lies love the skies. Let the truths not shatter the roots. Author of "Behind Their World".

2021-02-17 JoinedPakistan
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to E_Stunner_Official

    Kudos to you. The description is amazing, mysterious and catchy!

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    Solar System Online, or How to Survive a Death Game
    Fantasy · Johnsonlong696969
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to Cher_Yan

    Thanks a bundles. And of course, I will add it to my collection to read it. XOXO

    My idea for this one is, would you give love a second chance? Would you grow your character for you to deserve the second chance?
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    As the Wind Blows Your Scent to Me
    Contemporary Romance · hansora
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
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    This ones good. A gamer is here for a humorous ride of games, lol. The suspense is good, but I guess, as the story and plot are super catchy, you might wanna work on the description. If I would have depended on the description, believe me, I would have skipped this book. So, if you want this amazing story to win, work on its description/synopsis and make us know more.

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    Solar System Online, or How to Survive a Death Game
    Fantasy · Johnsonlong696969
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
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    Well... The cover is catchy, the name is amazing and the description is cutely absorbing. I am not a classical romance type of person, I am more into mystery, thriller and action, but this book is so... FLUFFY... hahahaha, yes. It is different from the romances we know. Good work here. I wish for you to win in WSA.

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    As the Wind Blows Your Scent to Me
    Contemporary Romance · hansora
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to Nancy_Jim

    I agree.

    Ch -1 Regarding the Novel
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    As the Wind Blows Your Scent to Me
    Contemporary Romance · hansora
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    It's amazing!

    My idea for this one is, would you give love a second chance? Would you grow your character for you to deserve the second chance?
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    As the Wind Blows Your Scent to Me
    Contemporary Romance · hansora
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Posted

    Well. I never read cultivation stories. I don't even know what is that, lol. Can you explain briefly? And secondly, it sounds amazing. And thirdly, please make the description/synopsis a bit longer. It... doesn't catch. If you start reading the book, it absorbs you, but you know, readers give 65% of their attention to the book cover and 35% on the description. If that doesn't catch them, then they won't give the story a chance. Your cover lacks a bit, and so does the description. It's good, not giving spoilers, but there must be enough spoilers that can drag someone from the ear along, lol. I am also a mystery/thriller writer, the reason I've spent a lot of time thinking what to write and what not to write. I hope it helps... Good story outline though. It's amazing.

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    Rising Dawn
    Fantasy · Minxs
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Posted

    Books for WSA must get a loud hand. Great work. Well, never imagined a spiritual drama fantasy to be so good. An advise here, please make your synopsis/description a bit bigger to catch more audience. It is just... straight forward. Include dialogues or more description of the worlds, or of the characters, or anything, that can make someone hooked for more. May you make it to the win-win! [img=recommend]

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    A Hell Called Serestral
    Fantasy · Riyah404
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to Kainat_Z_Official

    Thanks 😍❤️

    Dorchester has always been known for its chocolate box-like houses and its impeccably stunning British countryside. A cold breeze blew. I inhaled and started walking towards my shop.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to Kainat_Z_Official

    😂😂❤️❤️❤️

    She just nodded her head ever so slightly, probably didn't know what to say. I looked at her and nudged her slightly, "but he is stunning, isn't he?"
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Replied to Kainat_Z_Official

    And believe me or not... I so deeply have this syndrome...

    "Elmore..." She started. "I can't say to be rebellious but it's not always the same. There is no guarantee that anything will be repeated. And I think it's more about what you want and who you like than thinking about what will happen in the future. Who knows, after being mad she might approve of you both? If you like him, you gotta at least take a stand for it."
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    A maybe is better than a Denial. And like I've never had, I'm not denying the pureness, the innocence, the adoration of this book. Love is unacceptably uninvited, and Xander and Elmore has proved that. Loved this chapter full of the struggle of Love. 🔥🔥❤❤😍😍

    Ch 4 Chapter 3
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    ow owwwww!!! I can feel his happiness!

    "Okay, I'll wait," I said slowly. He smiled and left in hurry, saying over his shoulder that he will be on time.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    Hahahahahahahahahaha... I'm in love as well.

    "Maybe," I smiled. "Maybe is better than denial." He said. I shrugged in response as we both smiled at each other.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    Gumapta, handsome.

    I am sure you will not refuse to go to lunch with me today, right? Happiest birthday gorgeous."
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    Ahhhhhhh... The brokenness is calmed...

    "Purple lilacs represents first love. I am not sure about love but I am sure as hell that you're the first person who has this strange, killing yet calming kind of impact on me.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    I know. I know!!!!!

    When I came from inside, he was talking to Laia. He looked at me from head to toe and instead of his regular question he said he wanted to buy 25 purple lilacs. I wondered why he wanted flowers.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    10 is nine times better than 1... This is an epic line. ❤❤❤🔥

    "If I were you and there was even a 10 percent chance, I would totally take that chance. 10 is nine times better than 1. And aunt Alexa loves you so much. Just relax." She said and went back to her work.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
    Commented

    Me: Loving our CIA agent.

    "Elmore..." She started. "I can't say to be rebellious but it's not always the same. There is no guarantee that anything will be repeated. And I think it's more about what you want and who you like than thinking about what will happen in the future. Who knows, after being mad she might approve of you both? If you like him, you gotta at least take a stand for it."
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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  • E_Stunner_Official
    E_Stunner_Official1mth
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    Uh-huh... I... Don't have words. 😯😯

    "You do know what happened with dad. After his funeral, the first thing she did was make me promise that I'll never date anyone from the military. Even its navy, it is still military. I have seen mom crying for dad. She says that she doesn't want the same for me. And if I tell her that I like someone from the military, I don't even want to imagine what her reaction will be." I said with a little pang in my heart.
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    The Last Sunset
    Contemporary Romance · Kainat_Z_Official
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